托福作文中說明文精選范文

　　題目：Should a person with an incurable illness spend his last days in a hospital where he or she can receive the best possible medical care? Or should this person be permitted to die at home? In a brief essay, respond to the above questions. Be sure to explain which position you support.

　　試題分析

　　一 條件：患不治之癥的患者/在人世間的最后一段時(shí)間/到醫(yī)院接受最好的醫(yī)療與護(hù)理/允許在家謝世。

　　二 要求：就上述條件與兩種處理方法發(fā)表意見,說明你支持何種做法。

　　三 寫作分析：本題是世界范圍內(nèi)經(jīng)常爭(zhēng)論的話題，但至今無定論.寫作時(shí)可支持任何觀點(diǎn)，寫法用演繹法或歸納法。

　　Should a person with an incurable illness spend his last days in a hospital where he or she can receive the best possible medical care? Or should this person be permitted to die at home? These two questions are difficult to answer and may cause some heated arguments. My view is that we have to consider two different situations and make our decisions accordingly.

　　The first possible situation is that the patient is still conscious and able to express himself. In this case, we should talk to him and find out his own opinion. If he wishes to stay in a hospital, we should send him there and try to get the best medical care for him no matter how much it will cost. If he wants to stay at home, we should show respect for his opinion and do our best at home for him no matter how troublesome it may be. The rationale of this view is that the best we can do for a dying person is to satisfy his last wishes except when he wants anthanasia in a country in which it is still illegal.

　　The other possible situation is that the patient is no longer able to express himself. In this case, it is better to let him stay at home and spend his last days with his relatives. This view is based on the following considerations. This first is that since the patient is going to die anyway, it is better for him to die at home instead of a place where his relatives are not allowed to stay with him all the time. The second is that it would be a waste of money, time, and energy to hospitalize the patient. The third is that what a hospital can do for a dying person can only bring more suffering to him. For instance, operations or intravenous drips are useless and painful and fist aids applied to him can only make him live longer to suffer more. The best thing a hospital can do is to reduce his pains in his last days, but this can also be done at home.

　　In short, my view is that when the questions are considered objectively, the answer is clear: it is better for him, for his relatives, and for society if the patient stays and dies at home. However, as human beings, we cannot discuss a patient without emotional considerations. To fully understand this position, we can just imagine how we would feel if one of our realties were suffering from an incurable illness.

　　范文寫作分析

　　對(duì)于這個(gè)涉及到復(fù)雜而又微妙的感情之事,作者避免了簡(jiǎn)單的表態(tài)方式。文章采用演繹法,在第一段擺明自己的觀點(diǎn),然后詳細(xì)說明,最后再進(jìn)一步說明,處理感情方面的考慮。

　　第一段 敘述條件,擺明觀點(diǎn)

　　第二段 病人清醒情況下的做法

　　第三段 病人無法表達(dá)意愿時(shí)的做法

　　第四段 強(qiáng)調(diào)自己觀點(diǎn)的合理