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　　What Unemployment Brings to China

　　What Unemployment Brings to China

　　Fifteen years ago, the word "unemployment" was regarded as the most estranged word and the patent of capitalism. It is all of a sudden for millions of Chinese workers, especially in textile,to find that their ever well profited factories nearly bankrupt and themselves unemployed. Some criticize it as a cruel killer to the security of society. However, the advantages of "unemployment", in my opinion, outweigh the disadvantages in the long

　　To begin with, "unemployment" readjusts the industrial structure of the state-owned enterprises, which shows more and more defects. It is undeniable that products made in China have less competitive power compared with imported ones. Because the whole structure of our industry is labour intensive, which is now tangled with high cost and low efficiency. The first initiative to solve the problem, ruthless but useful, is to cut down the extra workers, which, in effect, save some dying enterprises from the edge of bankruptcy and enhance their efficiency and competitiveness.

　　"Unemployment" in some traditional industries, on the contrary, stimulates the development of some new industries, such as service industry, which create many jobs for those layoffs,which, in turn, stimulate the industry to prosper, as becomes an increasingly important part of the social economy.

　　Another profound influence "unemployment" brings is that it has uprooted the traditional outdated modes of thought, carved in our minds, fiercely and thoroughly, that a lifelong job no longer exists. The era of planned economy has come to its end.Tough competition has terminated the security of job and one should prepare himself for the corresponding transformation of society. "Run, or lose" becomes the golden rule of commodity economy. Amazingly, more and more layoffs took the lesson,made proper adjustment and then find themselves new positions.

　　"Unemployment", as an unavoidable economic phenomenon, is pounding on our out dated social system strongly. It is like a rainstorm that uproots the traditional modes of thought and brings life to the diversified industries, transforming the traditional industries and washing away the deep-rooted but outdated thoughts. Face it properly and we will have a shining future.

　　簡 評(píng)

　　失業(yè)下崗作為市場(chǎng)經(jīng)濟(jì)一個(gè)不可回避的現(xiàn)象，成為經(jīng)濟(jì)體制改革的熱點(diǎn)。如何看待下崗現(xiàn)象，失業(yè)下崗的積極作用何在，這是文章所要告訴我們的。

　　習(xí)作的結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，論說有力。樂穎毅同學(xué)能把失業(yè)下崗的現(xiàn)象和服務(wù)業(yè)在市場(chǎng)經(jīng)濟(jì)框架下的蓬勃發(fā)展聯(lián)系起來看，找出其中的邏輯關(guān)系和互動(dòng)性。并且指出這些事實(shí)和現(xiàn)象的背后是更深一層的思想形態(tài)的變革，是舊的思維模式的破碎和新的模式的確立。

　　這樣就構(gòu)成了一個(gè)完整的論述，在最后一段把“失業(yè)”比作暴風(fēng)雨，正以其強(qiáng)大的勢(shì)頭，沖刷著長期以來的傳統(tǒng)觀點(diǎn)，把論述推向了高潮。

　　文章的構(gòu)思新穎，謀篇巧妙，段與段之間有緊密的邏輯關(guān)系，

　　使整個(gè)論述顯得簡潔、有力。但不足的是每一點(diǎn)上的論述應(yīng)再細(xì)

　　化深入一點(diǎn)，有些用詞表達(dá)不夠準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)。

　　(點(diǎn)評(píng)教師：盧愛華)

　　What Unemployment Brings to China