A Fascinating Scenery,A Fascinating Scenery范文
A Fascinating Scenery
I have never seen such a beautiful street, a track to be exact. Nobody will forget it once he rests his eyes on the absorbing scenery. The track is long and straight. A great many trees stand in line on either side of the track. They are so high, big and exuberant that the track is almost separated from the outside. Hence, when walking along it, you will feel as if you were in a corridor which is formed by trees. No one can understand the great nature until he is intoxicated by the perfect landscape especially in autumn and winter.
At sunset in autumn, the track has become a golden world.Leaves are fluttering in the air with the wind just like the danclng butterflies. More have covered the ground, giving the track a thick yellow blanket. The trees have turned brown. They look so impressive, because here brown is the only color besides golden. So golden leaves, a golden track and golden sunshine dress up the world in a splendid gown.
At dawn in winter, however, a silver world appears before us. Now everything is white. Instead of the flying leaves, the white snow ornaments the world with its wonderful perform antes and the ground has changed its coat. And even the sunshine turns silver. Without leaves, the trees make friends with snow and prepare themselves for the Christmas. Silver snow, a silver track, silver trees and silver sunshine, the silver world also has its charm.
After reading my introduction, maybe you have a desire to enjoy it. Then don't hesitate. Let's go to seek it.
簡(jiǎn) 評(píng)
本文描寫了一條幽靜的小徑，兩邊長(zhǎng)著茂盛的大樹。作者選取了兩個(gè)場(chǎng)景來描繪小徑的美。第一個(gè)場(chǎng)景是秋天的日落，小徑成了一個(gè)金色的世界。落葉在空中飛舞，落到地上，好像鋪了一層厚厚的黃地毯。一眼望去，有金色的樹葉、小徑和陽光，仿佛進(jìn)入一個(gè)童話世界。第二個(gè)場(chǎng)景是冬日的黎明，呈現(xiàn)在眼前的是一個(gè)銀裝素裹的世界——銀色的雪、小徑、樹木和陽光。
文中，作者運(yùn)用了各種修辭手法，有擬人，如the trees make friends with snow；有比喻，如Plenty Of leaves?Just like the dancing butterflies.More have covered the ground，glvmg the tracka thick yellow blanket等，給文章增色不少。
筆者建議，文章最后最好能指明這條小徑在何處。比如這是我的家鄉(xiāng)，家鄉(xiāng)的景美，但家鄉(xiāng)人的心靈更美。寫景的目的是為了抒情。
(點(diǎn)評(píng)教師：黃鶯)
A Fascinating Scenery