English Composition Selection(II)

　　Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?

　　伍琴（七班）

　　More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.

　　On the one hand, some think that studying following the family teachers is better than self study. It can not only strengthen what you’ve learnt at school, but help you learn more useful things as well.

　　On the other hand, some people who have the different opinion consider it a waste of time and money, for many training classes and family teachers are just working for money, you can not learn something really useful there, and thus lose the time of relaxing yourselves.

　　In my opinion, as students, we should really know whether we need a training class or family teacher. First, make sure that you need them, and they would be helpful, then choose a reasonable one. Just remember, once you start and never give up.

　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章思路清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，行文流暢，銜接自然，用詞準(zhǔn)確，值得借鑒（趙守斌）

　　Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?

　　(14班 王怡)

　　More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend .There are two different viewpoints about it.

　　Some people think that going to training class or having family teachers can not only strengthen the knowledge the students have learned but also help them to study better .What’s more ,students can gain some knowledge that hasn’t been told in class.

　　However ,some others have an opposite opinion in their opinion ,this kind of study can make students passive in their studies and always depend on others .What’s worse ,some Training Class and Family teachers care not students but money .So it’s a waste of money .Students need have a rest after school .The Training Class will take up most of their spare time .

　　In my opinion ,both viewpoints are reasonable .The choice should depend on which one is fit for the students himself .If he’s good at self-studying ,he may stay at home and study by himself if he does well in listening to what teachers say ,studying in Training Class would also be a good choice .

　　本習(xí)作條理清晰,層次清楚,觀點(diǎn)名確且緊扣主題.語(yǔ)句通順,尚能達(dá)意.一些小詞用得也恰倒好處.只是個(gè)別句子還不夠簡(jiǎn)潔,今后應(yīng)注意錘煉句子.

　　(點(diǎn)評(píng)教師:馮輝)

　　Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?

　　Stephen Shan from Grade Two Class Three單博（高二3班）

　　More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.

　　Some people hold the opinion that a training class or family teacher is necessary. They believe that following a teacher is better than doing self-studies. During these “weekends studies” students cannot only strengthen the knowledge they have learnt in class, but also learn more things.

　　On the other hand, some people think that it’s not necessary to have a training class or a family teacher. Their ideas are as follows:

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