部位記人:母親的眼睛-My Mothers Eyes,部位記人:母親的眼睛-My M
部位記人:母親的眼睛-My Mothers Eyes
母親的眼睛
【內(nèi)容提示】
你母親長著一雙機(jī)敏、沉著的眼睛。每當(dāng)你遇到挫折時(shí)，這雙眼睛都會(huì)給你以鼓勵(lì)。你小時(shí)候?qū)W走路時(shí)，這雙眼睛鼓勵(lì)過你；再大點(diǎn)，你學(xué)騎自行車的時(shí)候，這雙眼睛鼓勵(lì)過你；上學(xué)后，你考試不及格時(shí)，她不責(zé)備你，而是用她那出神的眼睛鼓勵(lì)你。如今你長大了，不用再讓她操心了。但是，每當(dāng)你想起那雙眼睛，你就會(huì)感到她在激勵(lì)著你。
請(qǐng)你以“母親的眼睛”為題寫一篇英語文章。
【作文示范】
My Mother's Eyes
My mother has a pair of quick eyes which can speak. When I suffer setbacks①,her eyes seem to say,“Be brave, dear!”
When I was a baby learning to walk with great difficulty, my mother always lent me a hand and her eyes seemed to say,“Be brave and try again, dear!” Encouraged by her eyes, I stood up and moved bravely inch by inch toward her. When I threw myself into her arms at last, her eyes shone with happiness.
Later, the more I learned, the more difficulties I met with. But my mother's eyes always encouraged me. For example, when I was learning how to ride a bike, I was clumsy② and fell off over and over again. I was discouraged. But her firm eyes stared at me, telling me to be brave and try again. With her encouragement I could ride my bike very well before long.
When I failed in exams, my mother wouldn't blame me. On the contrary what I did in my papers would open her eyes to find my mistakes. And she would help me find out the reasons and want me to take my courage in both hands③.
Now I have grown up and don't have to depend so much on my mother. But whenever I suffer a setback, I feel as if my mother's eyes flashed across my mind with her encouraging words:“Be brave, dear!”
【詞語解釋】
①setback ['setb$k] n.挫折；失敗
�、赾lumsy ['kl)mzi] a.不靈活的；笨拙的
�、踭ake one's courage in both hands勇往直前
【寫法指要】
本文描寫了“母親”的一雙敏銳、沉著、閃亮、果斷的眼睛。每當(dāng)作者遇到困難的時(shí)候就會(huì)感到這雙眼睛在注視著自己，就會(huì)受到啟發(fā)和激勵(lì)。全文分為四個(gè)階段，但貫穿著一個(gè)主題，即“be brave”和“encourage”。就是說，文章用多次重復(fù)“be brave”和“eyes”，反復(fù)使用同根詞“courage, encourage, discouraging, encouragement”的手法使上下文連貫，集中對(duì)付引言段中出現(xiàn)的“setbacks”，使全文達(dá)到高度的統(tǒng)一（unity）。
部位記人:母親的眼睛-My Mothers Eyes