直抒胸臆:我最喜歡的顏色-My Favorite Colour,直抒胸臆:我最喜歡
直抒胸臆:我最喜歡的顏色-My Favorite Colour
我最喜歡的顏色
【內(nèi)容提示】
每個(gè)人都有自己所喜歡的顏色。你喜歡什么呢?白的,紅的,黃的,藍(lán)的,也或許是紫的。你喜歡某種顏色肯定有你自己的理由,而且見(jiàn)到這種顏色則愛(ài)不釋手,依依不舍,甚至凡是你穿的、戴的、用的都可能是這種顏色。請(qǐng)你寫一篇文章抒發(fā)你對(duì)某種顏色喜愛(ài)之情。
【作文示范】
My Favorite Colour
Of all the colours, I like blue best.
Blue is a nice-looking colour. How do you feel when you wake up to find a grey sky? Depressing①, I'm afraid. But when the sky is blue, you feel joyous②, I'm sure.
Blue is the colour of seas, rivers and lakes on a sunny day. I like swimming. Every time I swim I have a good time.
I like blue. So you can see that my pen, ball-pen③,pencil-box and so on are all blue.
I like blue, and many things of ours at school are blue, too. Look, our bags, quilts are blue, and so are our school suits. Even the words on our school envelopes and writing paper are printed in blue. Oh, I like blue very much, and I like our international school more.
。ㄟx自《英語(yǔ)畫刊》高中版1996年第11期)
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
①depressing [di'presiR] a.壓抑的;沉悶的
②joyous ['j&i s] a.喜氣洋洋的;高興的
③ball-pen ['b&:l pen] n.圓珠筆
【寫法指要】
作者直接抒發(fā)對(duì)藍(lán)色的偏愛(ài)。第一句單獨(dú)構(gòu)成一段,簡(jiǎn)捷明快地說(shuō)出自己最愛(ài)的是藍(lán)色。然后,作者由遠(yuǎn)及近,由上而下抒發(fā)自已對(duì)藍(lán)色的喜愛(ài)之情:先寫天空的藍(lán)色,再寫大海河湖的藍(lán)色,又寫自己用具的藍(lán)色,最后寫學(xué)校物品的藍(lán)色,這樣,作者把自己對(duì)藍(lán)色的熱愛(ài)之情寄托在了各個(gè)方面。
直抒胸臆:我最喜歡的顏色-My Favorite Colour