動(dòng)態(tài)描寫:大陳島紀(jì)游-A Visit to Dachen Islands
大陳島紀(jì)游
【內(nèi)容提示】
寫一篇游記，把你們一路走一路看的山水湖海的美景寫下來。比如，你們要去某地，需要乘火車或汽車，也許還要坐輪船等交通工具，一路上看到祖國或世界的大好河山，感慨萬千，由衷地對那些天造地設(shè)、神工鬼斧般的秀麗山川或歷史名勝贊嘆不已。
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A Visit to Dachen Islands
Last summer, the weather was hotter than usual, so some of my friends and I decided to go to the Dachen Islands and spend a few days there.
On our way, we looked out of the ship＇s windows and saw many little green islands on the sea.
With a loud whistle the ship went into the harbor. Through the windows, I saw many fishing boats sailing here and there. They went out of the harbor with hope and came back with loads of fish. On the market I saw a lot of baskets full of fish.
The next day, we all got up early and went to the beach near the hotel to watch the sun rising. We looked to the east. The clouds were reddish, and then turned bright red. Soon the sun slowly appeared and began to rise. The sky around the sun was very bright and the sun looked like a big ball. The sight was so beautiful that we would never forget.
Not only is the scenery beautiful on the Dachen Islands, but also the people there are very kind.
During our stay we enjoyed the beautiful scenery and ate a lot of sea food. To our disappointment, we had to leave the islands, but we＇ll always remember this trip and the people there.
�。ㄟx自《英語畫刊》高中版1996年第4期）
【寫法指要】
本文作者記述了他和同學(xué)們乘船去大陳島游覽和小住的情況。除引言段外，全文分兩個(gè)層次：二、三、四段寫景，人隨景走，景隨人移——海上，漁船點(diǎn)點(diǎn)；市上，鮮魚筐筐；日出美景永難忘；第五、六段寫人——人情好，海味美。文章構(gòu)成了一幅動(dòng)態(tài)的畫面。