Our Love are with You

　　our love are with you

　　by ---rita

　　on 12th of may in 2008, a horrible and severe earthquake hit wenchuan unexpectedlly. on hearing such a sorrow news, i couldn’t believe my ears it was the fact. the clock stooped at that time while my heart was broken. 'we are all wenchuan people", the earthquake is cared by the whole nation, and the pains of people who are suffering is also the pain of all people.

　　the sad news spread through everywhere in china, even in the whole world. it was cared by all. the buildings were razed in the worst-hit areas including thousands of people burried under ruins. the roads and communication facilities had been badly destroyed. tears in my eyes flashing,the sence we saw in the disaster couldn’t be described with words.

　　in the earthquake, the original buildings, had been moved to the ground. many lives were dead . but it truly reflected the world of love. the people from everywhere and soldiers went to help wenchuan.  the ordinary necessities were sent to them. the homeless were sent to live in the simple structures houses. the wounded and children were save lives .the rescue screen all those were touched by the people.

　　i believe that evevrything will be better. the disaster had blocked the door of many lives, but it couldn’t block the door of love. it couldn’t prevent us from rebuilding the newly wenchuan. as long as we unite as one, believe that the disaster will always be the last, our love are always with you !

　　by --- rita

　　漳州喬登美語(yǔ) 六年級(jí)學(xué)生:周邦枚

　　這篇英語(yǔ)文章語(yǔ)言流暢，感情豐富而層次清晰，英語(yǔ)知識(shí)運(yùn)用較好。句子架構(gòu)好。用場(chǎng)景表達(dá)了 “愛(ài)和汶川同在。災(zāi)難阻擋不了人世間愛(ài)的傳遞”。行文流暢。是一篇小學(xué)生成功的英語(yǔ)習(xí)作！