推薦：大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試短文寫(xiě)作（一）
一、六級(jí)寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
大學(xué)英語(yǔ)六級(jí)考試作文的目的旨在考核學(xué)生英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)的能力。作文考試時(shí)間為30分鐘, 要求寫(xiě)出不少于150個(gè)詞的短文。六級(jí)考試作文的出題方式有：命題作文，看圖畫(huà)或圖表作文，根據(jù)所給文章（英文或中文）寫(xiě)出文章摘要或大意，給出關(guān)鍵詞作文等�？荚嚨淖魑膬�(nèi)容為社會(huì)、文化或日常生活的一般常識(shí)，不涉及知識(shí)面過(guò)廣、專(zhuān)業(yè)性太強(qiáng)的內(nèi)容。對(duì)作文的要求是：切題，文理通順，表達(dá)正確，意思連貫，無(wú)重大語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。
下面介紹六級(jí)考試作文的評(píng)分原則和標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，并通過(guò)五份樣卷作一個(gè)詳細(xì)說(shuō)明。
(一) 作文評(píng)分原則
1. CET是檢查考生是否達(dá)到大學(xué)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)大綱規(guī)定的六級(jí)教學(xué)要求，對(duì)作文的評(píng)判應(yīng)以此要求為準(zhǔn)則。
2. CET作文題采用總體評(píng)分（Global Scoring）方法。閱卷人員就總的印象給出獎(jiǎng)勵(lì)分（Reward Scores）,而不是按語(yǔ)言點(diǎn)的錯(cuò)誤數(shù)目扣分。
3. 從內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言兩個(gè)方面對(duì)作文進(jìn)行綜合評(píng)判。內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言是一個(gè)統(tǒng)一體，作文應(yīng)表達(dá)題目所規(guī)定的內(nèi)容，而內(nèi)容要通過(guò)語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)。要考慮作文是否切題，是否充分表達(dá)思想，也要考慮是否用英語(yǔ)清楚而確切地表達(dá)思想，也就是要考慮語(yǔ)言上的錯(cuò)誤是否造成理解上的障礙。
4. 避免趨中傾向。該給高分的給高分，包括滿分；該給低分的給低分，包括0分，一名閱卷人員在所閱的全部作文卷中不應(yīng)只給中間的幾種分?jǐn)?shù)。
(二) 作文評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
1. 本題滿分為15分。
2. 閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)共分五等: 2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有標(biāo)準(zhǔn)樣卷一至二份。
3. 閱卷人員根據(jù)閱卷標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，對(duì)照樣卷評(píng)分，若認(rèn)為與某一分?jǐn)?shù)（如8分）相似，即定為該分?jǐn)?shù)（即8分），若認(rèn)為稍優(yōu)或稍劣于該分?jǐn)?shù)，即可加一分（即9分）或減一分（即7分），但不得加或減半分。
4. 評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：
2分……條理不清，思路紊亂，語(yǔ)言支離破碎或大部分句子均有錯(cuò)誤，且多數(shù)為嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
5分……基本切題。表達(dá)思想不清楚，連貫性差。有較多的嚴(yán)重語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。
8分……基本切題。有些地方表達(dá)思想不夠清楚，文字勉強(qiáng)連貫；語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤相當(dāng)多，其中有一些是嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤。
11分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字連貫，但有少量語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤。
14分……切題。表達(dá)思想清楚，文字通順，連貫性好�；旧蠠o(wú)語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，僅有個(gè)別小錯(cuò)。
[注: 白卷, 作文與題目毫不相關(guān), 或只有幾個(gè)孤立的詞而無(wú)法表達(dá)思想,則給0分。]
5. 字?jǐn)?shù)不足應(yīng)酌情扣分
累計(jì)字?jǐn)?shù) 140-149 130-139 120-129 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 ＜79
扣 分 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 9
[注:] 1.如題目中給出主題句, 起始句, 結(jié)束句, 均不得計(jì)入所寫(xiě)字?jǐn)?shù)
2. 規(guī)定內(nèi)容未寫(xiě)全者，按比例扣分。
實(shí)例一
2003年1月真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic It Pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 當(dāng)今社會(huì)上存在著很多不誠(chéng)實(shí)的現(xiàn)象。
2. 誠(chéng)實(shí)利人利己，做人應(yīng)該誠(chéng)實(shí)。
It Pays to Be Honest
①I(mǎi)n our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even one's closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist? Everybody is taught honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others. We will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, we'll feel guilt at last. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consumer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends will never believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again. So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Let's create a morally outstanding social.
�、贏lthough honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.
Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers won't buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. Those who always tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them. Besides, it is easier for a person with a good record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later. In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest.
③With the development of modern economic and industry, competitive is becoming more and more obvious. At the same time, the performance of dishonest is becoming more and more clearly.
Nowadays, there are many dishonest performance in our society. For example, some people found that he saled goods had past the preservation date. Not throw them away, they revised the perservation date, and saled them again after several days. Another case in the point, a pair of shoes was made from goat. However, in order to sale at a high price, the salers would say they were made from cow which has good quality. From the foregoing, we can see that dishonest dose not only harm to yourselves but also harm to others. And it is no use only realise the harmness of dishonest. We should be honest from now on and be honest in our daily life. It is only that people all over the world are honest them our country will be beautiful and wealthy.
�、躈ow in our society, many people are not honest in doing soming. We often can meet with soming happened cause by people who are not honest. For example, Now we take the bus need carry cents own, and when you upstairs the bus, you should put the cent into the money box. Every people do that, but some of the people put the other things instead the cents. For another example, it is more normal that in the exams we can always find some students see others. I consider that every people should be honest. As a people, honest should be first, because it can make us to be increase and make our socity develop. In doing every thing we should be honest all, study, word, life and so on. If you are honest, every people will be friend to you, and who will regard you are good people.
But if you don't be honest, people must unwilling to trath with you. So if you are want to be a good people, remember honest first.
�、軳owadays, many people choose not to be honest in our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; and some doctors treat their patients with unnecessary and expensive medicines in order to make money, sometimes damaged the patients' health, even their life. Seeing this situation. I think it must be changed. Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will make others willing to trust you. Second, being honest can lead you to face your problem bravely, which helps to solve it. And the last, honest surely helps to make the society more harmony. So. I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without honesty.
實(shí)例二
1999年6月真題
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reading Selectively or Extensively? You should write at least 120 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1. 有些人認(rèn)為讀書(shū)要有選擇
2. 有些人認(rèn)為應(yīng)當(dāng)博覽群書(shū)
3. 我的看法
Reading Selectively Or Extensively?
①When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.
Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books. But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.
To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading.
�、贗 think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read every book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise man. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limitted. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours.
③Most people thought that read books should have been selectived. But others belived reading extentively was correction.
Selective books or reading extensively?
Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas,
on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we intrested, and it would be helpful for us.
on another hand. Someone's intresting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldn't reading at only one level.
I confirmed all of these ideas were good but weren't wise.
As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful and helpful for us. Don't treat these books with rackless abandon.
The best technology of reading is connect.
�、蹾ow should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.
Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. What's more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldn't read them. Since we can't read all the books and we shouldn't read bad books, we must read selectively.
But others may not agree. They emphasize that today's society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge he'll have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.
Who's right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.
�、軸ome people think reading shall be choosed. Because some books are good to hummen beings and some books are harmful to people.
Some people think that men shoud read books widely. Because wide reading can help man get much knowledge. And man can use it to change the world.
It is my point that reading must be selectively. Because reading is important to man. Some books can help man but some books can lead some people to crime. It can be seen in the newspapers and watched on TV. We can make full use of some good books and gain more useful knowledge. It can make our life more beauiful. We must give up those unhelpful books. They are not good to us. Reading them is wasting time and money. So reading selectively is an important part in reading.