上海新東方名師評析新六級作文范文
上海新東方名師評析新六級作文范文
作者：上海新東方明星教師 吳澤揚
the importance of reading classics
1、閱讀經(jīng)典書籍隊人的成長至關重要
2、現(xiàn)在愿意閱讀經(jīng)典的人越來越少，原因是……
3、我們大學生應該怎么做
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審題：原因現(xiàn)象類�？捎媚Ｊ�，中心句＋1、2、3。因為是外語考試文章，觀點不用細查，重要的語音表達。請一定記住，簡單但嚴重錯誤是應該盡力避免的，寧可簡單也別出現(xiàn)這種錯誤。本樣文有些不妥之處，但完全符合四六級寫作的基本要求，中心突出(把提綱變?yōu)橛⑽�，以段首句形式出現(xiàn))，層次分明(邏輯詞，即連接詞的恰當應用)，語言有變化(近意表達，舉行轉(zhuǎn)化)，無重大語音錯誤。
Now some people, especially the elderly, are of the view that classics play a significant role in the life. English learners, for example, can benefit a lot from the famous readings, or classical books. Besides, they maintain that their childhood is exposed to these GREat minds.
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However, young men in growing numbers seldom enjoy reading these articles or books. In other words, they find few interests in reading so-called classics. A lot of reasons are responsible for this. To begin with, they are in the shadow of practical minds. These classics may not meet the needs. What’s more, online reading is a good way for people to get information easily and efficiently. Moreover, the young people are too busy to read them.
From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that effective actions should be taken to prevent the situation. First, we can enjoy these minds in our free time. Second, these articles or novels will be arranged for further reading in our retirement. Certainly, it is high time that we placed GREat emphasis on the issue.