Television Advertisements,Television Advertisements范文

　　Television Advertisements

　　Television Advertisements

　　Today, a growing number of commercial (商業(yè)性的) advertisements jump into TV programs, which is a controversial issue.

　　Television advertisements have positive aspects. First, they can provide viewers with valuable information about merchandise. Second, the wide spread of TV ads may also stimulate the economy. Finally, these commercials (廣告) often finance the operation cost of television stations.

　　However, television advertisements also have negative aspects. In the first place, these ads often interrupt interesting programs. Besides, some ads may be highly unreliable if they are motivated by profit. What is more, ads may increase people's greed by encouraging them to own so called "valuable" products. Finally, some TV ads give viewers a false sense of reality by promising that certain products will make potential customers lucky, attractive, rich and successful.

　　Weighing the positive and negative aspects, I think that we should turn TV ads to their best advantage. TV ads should be carefully examined and scientifically edited before they are allowed to become a part of people's life. TV stations and producers should treat TV ads as their good servant, not their bad master.

　　范文分析 作者在參照中文提綱的基礎(chǔ)上推陳出新，將段落按照發(fā)展層次整理合并在一起。前段能門然引起后段，下段是上段的必然發(fā)展、邏輯歸宿與邏輯承諾。在討論電視廣告的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)時(shí)分別使用了兩組詞匯表示并列關(guān)系(First，Second，……；In the first place，……)，使句子與句子的排列井井有條。從優(yōu)點(diǎn)轉(zhuǎn)到缺點(diǎn)時(shí)，用“However”連接，過(guò)渡自然明了。最后一段以主題句引出作者的觀點(diǎn)，利落醒目。傘篇流暢通順，互相銜接、前后照應(yīng)、渾然一體，顯示了連貫性。

　　Television Advertisements