小升初英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作的技巧指導(dǎo)
我們都知道，想在小升初英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作拿高分，就要摸透老師的喜好，引起“讀者”的注意。而在寫(xiě)作中句子偏長(zhǎng)恰恰會(huì)適得其反，很容易讓人漏聽(tīng)一、兩個(gè)單詞，影響對(duì)整個(gè)句子的理解，所以我們要教大家一些化繁為簡(jiǎn)的技巧——
1、巧用單個(gè)詞：即用一個(gè)單詞代替一組意義相同的單詞。比如：
用forget(忘記)代替do not remember(沒(méi)有記住)
用ignore(忽視)代替do not pay attention to(不注意)
用now(現(xiàn)在)代替at this point in time(此時(shí)此刻)
用because(由于)代替due to the fact that(鑒于下列事實(shí))
2、省略同義詞或近義詞。比如在下面例句中，形容詞important(重要的)和significant(有重要意義的)，就是兩個(gè)同義詞(也可以說(shuō)是近義詞)，我們可以省略important，只保留significant。
The government project is important and significant.(這項(xiàng)政府計(jì)劃是重要的，有重要意義。)
The government project is significant.(這項(xiàng)政府計(jì)劃有重要意義。)
3、在不改變句子含義的前提下，省略所有可以省略的單詞。比如在下面例句中，the cover of the book(書(shū)的封面)可以省略成the book cover，is red in color(是紅色的)可以省略成is red。
The cover of the book is red in color.(書(shū)的封面是紅色的)
The book cover is red.(書(shū)的封面是紅色的)
現(xiàn)在我們把這三種方法結(jié)合起來(lái)，將一個(gè)冗長(zhǎng)、繞嘴的句子，改寫(xiě)成一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)短、易懂的句子。
University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in order that students, faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage through those areas of the campus.(校內(nèi)道路必須是便于通行的，不擁堵的，以便讓學(xué)生、教師和職員能夠無(wú)阻礙地通過(guò)，到達(dá)校園的各處。)
University malls must be free enough from congestion to allow people to walk through easily.(校內(nèi)道路不應(yīng)當(dāng)擁堵，以便人們順利通行。)
4、用介詞短語(yǔ)替代從句。比如：
原句：While they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.
修改后：During tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.
原句：When you come to the second traffic light, turn right.
修改后：At the second traffic light turn left.
5、刪除諸如"who is”或"that is"之類的關(guān)系代詞，變從句為短語(yǔ)。比如：
原句：The novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the Middle Ages.
修改后：The three-part novel told a story set in the Middle Ages.
注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容詞來(lái)表達(dá)，節(jié)省了四個(gè)不必要的單詞"which is written in"。我們經(jīng)�？梢詫㈥P(guān)系代詞如"that"去掉，這只會(huì)引起最少的變動(dòng)。