Please protect the environment

　　china has put a ban on the use of much thinner plastic bangs starting on june 1st,.this ban can stop the shop ,drugestore with providing free bags .i think it is a good way to  protect the environment.

　　the ban is very useful it can helps to make our life more bueatiful than before .the plastic bags may cause the white pollution and also can polleted the water ,the are dangerous for our health .so we should carry along this ban to change our enviorment .

　　what should we do?i think we should tell our relatives to carry cloth bags or basket while the are going to shopping ,we are not supposed to drop the plastic bags any where. and we should reduce the waste ,reuse some bags and recycle plastic bags ........i think that if all the people do like this .our  enviroment must be better and better!!!!!!

　　don't waite at all ,please do this job now

　　i believe we can ,come on !!!!!!!!!!!1

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　　please protect the environment

　　china has put a ban on(改against) the(加much) use of much(去掉該處much) thinner(改thin) plastic bangs(,加which will start) starting( 去掉starting) on june(june) 1st,.this ban can stop the shop(s) ,drugestore(s) with(改from) providing free bags .i think it is a good way to protect the environment.

　　the ban is very useful(加.)  it can helps(改help) to make our life(改lives) more bueatiful (beautiful)than before .the(改the) plastic bags may cause the(去掉the) white pollution and also can(改can also) polleted(改pollute) the water ,the(改they) are dangerous for our health .so we should carry along(改keep along with) this ban to change our enviorment .

　　what should we do?i think we should tell our relatives(改people) to carry cloth bags or basket(baskets) while the(they) are going to(改 going) shopping ,(改.)we are not supposed to drop the plastic bags any where. (at the same time),and(去掉and) we should reduce the waste ,reuse some(去掉. 并加plastic) bags(加use) and(find ways to) recycle plastic bags ........i think that if all the people do like this .our enviroment must(改will) be better and better!!!!!!

　　don'twaite at all(改don't wait any more) ,please do this job (right)now,

　　i believe we can(protect our enviroment well) ,come on !!!!!!!!!!!1 （用一個即可）

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　　please protect the environment

　　china has put a ban against the much use of thin plastic bangs which will start on june 1st,. this ban can stop the shops ,drugestores from providing free bags .i think it is a good way to protect the environment.

　　the ban is very useful. it can help to make our lives more beautiful  than before .the plastic bags may cause white pollution and can also pollute the water ,they are dangerous for our health .so we should keep along with this ban to change our enviorment .

　　what should we do?i think we should tell people to carry cloth bags or baskets while they are going shopping .we are not supposed to drop the plastic bags any where. at the same time, we should reduce the waste ,plastic bags use and find ways to recycle plastic bags ........i think that if all the people do like this .our enviroment will be better and better! 

　　don't wait any more ,please do this job right now,

　　i believe we can protect our enviroment well ,come on !