A trip notice
dear students:
on march 12 in the morning at 8:00am our school plan to take a trip on foot. our purpose of the trip is coming to jiangjun mountain near city. at present, students are studying hard, and most students forget the importance of sports. if you want to study better, you must keep healthy, and you should join this activities. at that time, you should take the drinks enough for yourself. please wait at the school door. that’s all.
school office.
批 改 老 師lanboss評 分97分級 別優(yōu)秀評 語
1. our purpose of the trip is coming to jiangjun mountain near city. 改為we are going to jiangjun mountain which is near our city.
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