Christmas day
for many youngsters, it is a time for parties and happy faces; for a group of chinese scholars, it is a cultural threat to be resisted.
as young chinese were enjoying the day, many scholars form chinese famous universities believed that is western cultural invasion. they criticized christmas marketing by shops and restaurants, christmas reports by the media, and the blind of worship of foreign things. if we let our traditional festival disappear, there will be a cultural gap, which western values may fill.
but many other people think that there is no need to worry about the popularity of christmas in china. actually, most of the youngsters are just interested in new things. christmas means a happy time to them instead of a religious holiday. to sum up, it doesn’t matter whether it’s chinese or western. they just hope every day is festival.
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for many youngsters, it is a time for parties and happy faces; for a group of chinese scholars, it is a cultural threat to be resisted.
as young chinese were enjoying the day, many scholars form chinese famous universities believed that is western cultural invasion. they criticized christmas marketing by shops and restaurants, christmas reports by the media, and the blind of worship of foreign things. if we let our traditional festival disappear, there will be a cultural gap, which western values may fill.
but many other people think that there is no need to worry about the popularity of christmas in china. actually, most of the youngsters are just interested in new things. christmas means a happy time to them instead of a religious holiday. to sum up, it doesn’t matter whether it’s chinese or western. they just hope every day is festival.
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1.many scholars form（from) chinese 2. believed that(加it) is western cultural invasion.3. and the blind of(去掉of) worship of foreign things. 4.about the popularity of christmas in china(china). 評語 文章介紹了對年輕人崇拜西方文化的擔心，寫的非常到位，能把自己的意思完整的正確的體現(xiàn)出來，句子結構非常好，語言功底扎實。你很棒。加油。