中考優(yōu)秀作文：我和朋友之間的故事
征文——我和朋友之間的故事
在我們成長(zhǎng)的道路上，朋友是不可或缺的風(fēng)景。在相知相伴的歲月里，留下了多少美好的故事和難忘的回憶!某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社以“A Story Between My Friend And Me”為題開(kāi)展征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你按要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇文章參賽。
要求：
故事必須原創(chuàng);
80-120詞，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱(chēng)。
參考要點(diǎn)：
分享故事(起因，經(jīng)過(guò)，結(jié)果……);
表達(dá)感受(幸福，感動(dòng)，思考……);
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A Story Between My Friend And Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me.
高分范文
【寫(xiě)作點(diǎn)撥】本文是一篇命題作文，并給出了參考要點(diǎn)。由題目“A Story Between My Friend and Me”可知寫(xiě)作的重點(diǎn)在于敘述故事，并表達(dá)感受。寫(xiě)作時(shí)，可選取個(gè)人與朋友之間印象深刻，且比較有教育意義的事件。敘述個(gè)人故事，要用第一人稱(chēng)，且時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般過(guò)去時(shí)，表達(dá)感受時(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【高分范文】
A Story Between My Friend and Me
There is always something unforgettable in my life, especially the story between my friend and me. One thing happened in the past had a deep influence on me.
Here is the story. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt myself badly. My left leg was broken. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. Then my friend Mingming came to see me. When he knew about that, he said he could help me with my study. On hearing this, I didn’t feel worried any more. From that day on, he taught me every day. I was so moved. I didn’t fall behind the other students with Mingming’s help. I thanked him a lot.
In my opinion, friends are very important in our life. No matter what happens, true friends will always be friends.