2020中考滿分作文：照片背后的故事
照片背后的故事
在過去的日子里，我們?cè)?jīng)歡笑，也曾經(jīng)哭泣……照片，或?qū)⑦@些精彩定格，或勾起你對(duì)往事的回憶。某英語網(wǎng)站向你發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。請(qǐng)你按要求用英語寫一篇文章，分享你照片背后的故事。
要求：
故事必須原創(chuàng);
80-120詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);
文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱。
參考要點(diǎn)：
描述你的照片(時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，人物……);
分享你的故事(起因，經(jīng)過，結(jié)果……);
談?wù)勀愕母惺?感動(dòng)，懷念，影響……)。
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo,
高分范文
【寫作點(diǎn)撥】本文要求圍繞“照片”敘述一個(gè)與之相關(guān)的故事，是一篇記敘文。根據(jù)參考要點(diǎn)可知，文章屬于經(jīng)典“三段式”的寫作：1. 描述照片拍攝的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)和人物等基本信息;2. 敘述與照片相關(guān)的故事，包括起因、經(jīng)過和結(jié)果等;3. 談?wù)搶?duì)事情的感受。寫作過程中，要注意時(shí)態(tài)的變化：描述過去發(fā)生的事情主要用一般過去時(shí)，談?wù)搶?duì)事情的感受主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。
【高分范文】
This is a photo that is very special to me. In the photo, I was 10 while my dad looked younger. Look, we are playing ping pong happily.
I used to be a ping pong player. My dad trained me so hard, though he was tired after a day’s work. Once, I lost a game and I felt so sad that I wanted to give up. My father said nothing, sitting quietly with me. The next morning, I found a piece of paper. It said, “Never give up, dear. I am proud of you!”
Now, I spend less time playing ping pong because of my busy study. But I will never forget what my father told me. He is proud of me. How lucky I am to be his daughter!