15年中考英語寫作突破：完形填空
完型填空 (補(bǔ)全短文)
"三遍法":第一遍了解大意;第二遍作題;第三遍檢查確認(rèn)
例題:
Alex ___1___ in a factory in a big town. He liked ____2____ very much, and was very good at it. Whenever he was free, he went down to the small ___3___ behind the factory and tried to catch some fish, but there were very ___4____ there, because the water of the river was dirty.. then one summer he went to the seaside during his holidays and ___5__ at a small, cheap hotel.
"I've never fished in the sea ____6___," he thought. "It will be rather different from fishing in our river."
On the first day he ____7____ a lot of fish and was very ____8___. He gave them to he hotel, and they ____9___ them for all the persons at the hotel, and they enjoyed them very much. After that, he did this every day. But when he got his bill at the ____10____ of his holidays, he saw on it "For oil to fry fish (7days): 14 dollars."
答案:1. worked 2. fishing 3. river 4. few 5.stayed 6. before
7. caught 8.happy/pleased/glad 9. cooked 10. end
3.短文寫作
短文寫作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)
評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):
第一檔:(15分-13分)符合題目要求,整篇表達(dá)清楚,語法無誤,詞匯拼寫正確,卷面整潔。
第二檔:(12分-10分)符合題目要求,整篇表達(dá)清楚,語法有少量錯(cuò)誤,少量拼寫錯(cuò)誤,卷面欠整潔。
第三檔:(9分-6分)基本符合題目要求,漏掉若干關(guān)鍵詞,超出了題目限制,整篇表達(dá)基本清楚,語言有部分錯(cuò)誤。
第四檔:(3分-5分) 只能寫出題目要求的一兩個(gè)要點(diǎn);只有個(gè)別句子能看懂,語法、詞匯錯(cuò)誤很多。
第五檔:(1分-2分)只寫出了符合題意的若干單詞。
寫作要求: 符合題意;邏輯通暢;語法單詞正確;卷面清潔。
寫作的難題--寫作的步驟
篇--段--句--詞
1."篇" 明確主題
2."段" 構(gòu)建結(jié)構(gòu)
運(yùn)用"提綱"
提綱案例
《我最喜愛的老師》
篇 主題:
段 提綱: 1. 老師基本信息介紹
a. 年齡
b. 相貌
c. 所授科目
d. …
2.令我感動(dòng)的小故事 (描寫與敘事相結(jié)合)
a. 時(shí)間 b. 地點(diǎn) c. 事情的經(jīng)過 d. 關(guān)鍵詞 shy; encourage
3.我對(duì)老師的評(píng)價(jià)
關(guān)鍵詞:enjoy his class; like
3. "句" 填充內(nèi)容
多用短句(簡(jiǎn)單句),慎用長(zhǎng)句(并列句/復(fù)合句/并列復(fù)合句)
文中參雜若干語法正確的長(zhǎng)句能夠成為亮點(diǎn)并得到加分。
短句為主,輔之于長(zhǎng)句。
句子的完整、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、單復(fù)數(shù)、以及動(dòng)詞的變形。
修辭
比喻 像…
be like The house is like a tank.
He is like a panda.
as… as… I am as hungry as a wolf.
The teacher is as busy as a bee.
He is as strong as a horse.
夸張 I am the luckiest boy in the world to have such a nice teacher.
擬人 The sky is smiling with beautiful sunshine.
4."詞"
可分為 "一般詞匯" 和 "具體詞匯"
一般詞匯 He is a good man. good
→ 具體詞匯 honest; diligent; hardworking; kind; nice; warmhearted; brave; selfless.
"一般描寫" 和 "具體描寫"
一般描寫 She is very beautiful.
→ 具體描寫 She is very beautiful. She has dark hair, big shining eyes, and pretty face.