as is vividly betrayed in the drawing above  (開始描述圖畫）， 加上which is both upsetting and most thought-provoding (第一端）描述圖畫

the aim  of the painter of the drawing above can be briefly stated as follow (陳述觀點 ）  可以把這些話加到作文中去 結(jié)合作文內(nèi)容
perhapers no other things could gain more public attention than...in china for the time being
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it is generally believed that...is a hot topic which is most talked about ,not only by the city residents but also by famers. (任選一個）

as the society becomes more and more advanced and complicated . ...plays a more and more important role in the life of individual members of the society and in the development of the society itself

according to recent investigation, there is an increasing numbers of people who share the concern about the issue of  ... which is a problem that deserves public,professional and political attention

different people have different opinions. everything has its advantages and disadvantages .it is  assciated  with your experience ,life style and emotional concern .it is really true for this case 

advantage and disadvantage are the basic dual concepts of nearly everthing in our life ,it goes without saying that for every advantage,there is always a disadvantage .an advantageous for one group might to prove disdvantages to others .it is really true for this case(作比較）

句中最好使用一個倒裝句 only + 狀語 + 小倒裝   如
only when we develop ourselves in a well-rounded way ,can we become prodctive memebers of society （正文）

counter-measures must be taken immediately so as to  ...
first of all law and regulations must be set up  in addition ,a long-term and nation -wide campaign must be launched to  popularize...among the general public. only in this way can we keep...(結(jié)尾）