高考英語書面表達分類模板
敘事類
外出活動、欣賞美景(日記)
we decided to go out for a picnic.
i had a pleasant outing with some of my classmates today.
early in the morning, we set off for the farm for a visit.
when we reached the farm, we were given a warm welcome.
they showed us around the farm(we were shown around the farm) , where we saw many kinds of plants.
we caught sight of a stream with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides.
we were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.(我們完全被大自然的奇妙和偉大折服了)
we jumped and shouted like innocent (天真的) children.
once on the top of the hill/the moment we got to the top of the hill, we were deeply struck/attracted by the beautiful scenery.
how we enjoyed the beautiful views from the top !
after being divided into groups, we set to work at once.
some of us were getting water, some (were) cutting the meat and vegetables, and others (were) sitting on the grass enjoying music.
birds were singing sweetly in the trees and butterflies were dancing gracefully in the garden/fields.
when lunch time came, we sat on the grassland, eating and drinking happily.
the meal was so delicious that we enjoyed it very much.
we sang and danced together to the music.
three hours had passed before we knew it.
the time passed quickly before we knew it.
it was time for us to go back when the sun started to go down.
i spent the whole afternoon with our cousins, enjoying the fine scenery and fresh air in the country.
at about four o’clock in the afternoon, we said goodbye to them
at four o’clock in the afternoon we had to return.
they came out to see us until we disappeared in the distance.
on the way back, we were laughing and talking all the time.
what a wonderful weekend we had!
we enjoyed ourselves very much.
through these out-of class activities we can learn a lot of things that can’t be learned in class.
although we were tired, we felt very happy. i think it’s our duty to cover our country with green.
意外事故、天災人禍
i was walking along the street when a terrible accident happened in the street.
one day something unpleasant happened.
the girl fell off her bike and was badly hurt.
fortunately, the injured people were sent to hospital without delay.
an elderly man was hit by a car while he was crossing the road.
he fell down to the ground with a cry.
the girl was too frightened to move.
it was soon found out that the driver had drunk too much wine before driving.
the accident delayed all the traffic for an hour and caused the damage of $80,000
lots of people lost their lives in the floods.
the big floods, which occurred in 1998, caused great losses.
a big fire broke out in an office building in a busy street. the cause of the fire has been unknown. it is being investigated.
the fire lasted about two hours and was finally put out in the afternoon.
as a result, the three-storied building was destroyed, 50 people were killed, and more than 200 were injured.
up to the present, the cause of the accident is still unknown.
助人為樂、 舍己救人
without thinking about her own safety, she rushed out and pulled him back.
he hurried to school, reaching the schoolyard quite out of breath.
she told the teacher what had happened to her on the way to school.
the blind man was out of danger, but she lost her life./got injured.
he was praised for what he had done.
she offered us some gifts, but we refused to accept them.
they all thanked him for his help.
wondering what to do, tom saw a policeman.
we hurried to the policeman for help.
with the help of the policeman, we found the owner of the bag.
a clever idea came to his mind.
then he put his idea into practice.
i left the hospital without giving my name.
this may be the most unforgettable experience of my life.
he felt happy because he had done a good deed.
it was not until then that i really understood the meaning of the proverb:
“ helping others is the source of happiness.”
he will always be remembered as a hero.
人物寫照、生平事跡
he was from a poor peasant’s family.
he is about 1.72 meters in height
by the age of 14, he had taught himself advanced mathematics.
she is already in her fifties, but she looks younger for her age.
he is short and thin with a pair of thick glasses.
she is tall and slim with big dark eyes and black hair.
my english teacher, miss zhang, is a middle-aged woman.
she often helps those who have difficulty in doing their homework.
with her help, i have caught up with my classmates.
at the age of eight he became a member of the diving team in guangdong province. a few years later, he won a gold medal at the 11th asian games and became a world champion.
he has his own way of teaching.
he has much knowledge and good at teaching.
all these years he has been working hard.
many times he has been praised for his excellent work.
he gets on very well with us students.
he is not only our good teacher but also our good friend.
he is honest and always ready to help others. that’s why we made him monitor.
we all considered her pronunciation to be the best of all.
he is a worthy person for us to learn from.
he graduated from qinghua university in 1982.
an american company wanted to employ him with high pay, but he refused.
he received a doctor’s degree in 1988.
he is strict with us and careful in his work.
he won the first prize in the physics contest.
he devoted all his life to education.
he is loved and respected by us all.
she is considered as one of the best teachers year by year.
with his help, we have made great progress in our studies.
he will always be remembered as a great leader, a wise and warm-hearted man.
he is regarded as a fighter by most of the people in the world.
miss zhang is such a good teacher that we all love her very much.
such was elbert einstein, a man of great achievements.
議論文
規(guī)勸惡習、見解評說
different people have got different attitudes towards failure.
different people have different opinions about smoking.
opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fee.
on the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged.
there are always two aspects(方面) to any situation.
everything lives with opposite forces. the same can be said about modern technology, such as internet.
some (foolish) people seem to think/believe/hold the view that smoking is an enjoyment. but in fact, smoking does great harm to people’s health.
we must try to persuade people to give up smoking.
it is investigated that 30% of the computers are used to play games.
according to a recent investigation, ……
playing games on computers can be a waste of time.
it’s been proved that early rising can make people full of energy.
early rising helps to keep fit.
as the english proverb says, “early to bed and early to rise, make a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”
experts suggest that people should have regular sports every day.
study shows that cigarette smoking can cause cancers.
in addition to health problems, there are other reasons to give up smoking.
from the above, i come to the conclusion that smoking does great harm to our health.
from now on, we ought to break away from the bad habit and form a good one.
millions of smokers die from illness caused by smoking tobacco.
my suggestions are as follows.
as future builders of our country, we should make full use of our
time to work hard ,and do things to benefit our country.
as we all know, spending too much time on tv may have bad effects on our work and health, especially on our eyes.
therefore, we should be aware of(注意) when to watch, how to watch, and what to watch.
there are many ways of keeping good health.
nowadays, taxies bring people a lot of convenience, but also cause a lot of trouble.
regulations should be laid down for taxi drivers.(應該專門為出租車司機指定交通規(guī)則)
now more and more students are getting near-sighted in schools,
because they have paid little attention to the care of their eyes.
寫作的七項基本原則
一、長短句原則工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長句，累死人！寫一個短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：
as a creature, i eat; as a man, i read. although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可見，長短句結合，抑揚頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！
強烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長一短，且先長后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個要點的時候采用先短后長的句群形式，定會讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結尾一般用一長一短就可以了�！ �
主題句原則國有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會給人造成“群龍無首”之感！相信各位讀過一些破爛文學，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內，結果造成我們稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險型）或者結尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會平安無事！
特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險的！
to begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）. without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer allthe questions correctly.
一二三原則領導講話總是第一部分、第一點、第二點、第三點、第二部分、第一點…如此羅嗦�？僧吘惯�是條理清楚�？脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關鍵性的“標簽”來判定你的文章是否結構清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個要點前就清楚了�！ �
first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）
firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）
the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）
in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強烈推薦）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強烈推薦）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強烈推薦）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用于兩點的情況）
10）for one thing, for another thing（適用于兩點的情況）
建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時說話的時候也應該條理清楚！
短語優(yōu)先原則
寫作時，尤其是在考試時，如果使用短語，有兩個好處：其一、用短語會使文章增加亮點，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單，看不到一個自己不認識的短語，必然會看你低一等。相反，如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點—精彩的短語，那么你的文章定會得高分了。其二、關鍵時刻思維短路，只有湊字數(shù)，怎么辦？用短語是一個辦法！比如：
i cannot bear it.
可以用短語表達：i cannot put up with it.
i want it. 可以用短語表達：i am looking forward to it. 這樣字數(shù)明顯增加，表達也更準確。
五、多實少虛原則原因很簡單，寫文章還是應該寫一些實際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個很好的時候，不應該之說nice這樣空洞的詞，應該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital之類的形象詞。再比如：
走出房間，general的詞是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應該說：slip out of the room
小姐走出房間應該說：sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應該說：dance out of the room
老人走出房間應該說：stagger out of the room
所以多用實詞，少用虛詞，文章將會大放異彩！
多變句式原則
加法（串聯(lián)）
都希望寫下很長的句子，像個老外似的，可就是怕寫錯，怎么辦，最保險的寫長句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后關系或者并列關系。比如說：
i enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個超級句式：
not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短語可以用：
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
轉折（拐彎抹角）
批評某人缺點的時候，我們總習慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點，然后轉入正題，再說缺點，這種方式雖然陰險了點，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說話的時候，只要在要點之前先來點廢話，注意二者之間用個專這次就夠了。
the car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
the coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短語：
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 因果（so, so, so）
昨天在街上我看到了一個女孩，然后我主動搭訕，然后我們去咖啡廳，然后我們認識了，然后我們成為了朋友…可見，講故事的時候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個詞就變得很常見了。其實這個詞表示的是先后或因果關系！
the snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短語：
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）
有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長成這個樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子，就更會讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實就是主語從句，表語從句，賓語從句的變形�！ �
舉例：this is what i can do.
whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復雜成分：
when to go, why he goes away…
5）附加（多此一舉）
如果有了老婆，總會遇到這樣的情況，當你再講某個人的時候，她會插一句說，我昨天見過他；或者說，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語�！ �
the man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
i don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
mr liu, our oral english teacher, is easy-going.
其實很簡單，同位語--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個句子的構成；定語從句—借用之前的關鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個句子插入其中，但是whom or that關鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前�！ �
6）排比（排山倒海句）
文學作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那么我希望你引用一個個的排比句，一個個得對偶句，一個個的不定式，一個個地詞，一個個的短語，如此表達將會使文章有排山倒海之勢！
whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in london for you.
nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
we have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（氣勢恢宏）
要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可！
挑戰(zhàn)極限原則既然十挑戰(zhàn)極限，必然是比較難的，但是并非不可攀！
原理：在學生的文章中，很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨立主格的句子，其實也很簡單，只要花上5分鐘的時間看看就可以領會，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，分詞要求主語一致，而獨立主格則不然。比如：
the weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the western hills.
africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of china.如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！ 三、文章主體段落的三大殺手锏
一、舉實例思維短路，舉實例！提出一個觀點，舉實例！提出一個方案，舉實例！而且者也是我們揭示一個觀點最好的方式，任何情況下，只要我們無法繼續(xù)文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！
in order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible simulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. for instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
更多句型：
to take…as an example, one example is…, another exampleis…, for example
做比較方法：寫完一個要點，比較與之相似的；又寫完一個要點，再比較與之相反的；
世界上沒有同樣的指紋，沒有相同的樹葉，文章亦同，只有通過比較，你才會發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點（through comparison）和不同點（through contrast）。下面是一些短語：
相似的比較：
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較：
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,…
三、換言之沒話說了，可以換一句話再說，讓你的文章在多一些字，或者文鄒鄒地說，是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點�！ �
實際就是重復重復再重復！下面的句子實際上就三個字i love you!
i am enthusiastic about you. that is to say, i love you.
i am wild about you. in other words, i have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我們舉過的例子：
i cannot bear it.
可以用短語表達：i cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說：i cannot bear it. that is to say, i cannot put up with it or i am fed up with it.
更多短語： in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply.
雅思寫作常用單詞----常用的連接詞
常用的連接詞:
1)表層次:
first, firstly to begin with further in the first place
second, secondly to start with still furthermore
third, thirdly what is more last last but not least
also and then next besides
and equally important too moreover
besides in addition finally
2)表轉折；
by contrast although though yet
at the same time but despite the fact that even so
in contrast nevertheless even though for all that
notwithstanding on the contrary however in spite of
on the other hand otherwise instead still
regardless
3)表因果；
therefore consequently because of for the reason
thus hence due to owing to
so accordingly thanks to on this account
since as on that account in this way
for as a result as a consequence
4）表讓步：
still nevertheless concession granted naturally
in spite of all the same of course despite
even so after all
5)表遞近：
furthermore moreover likewise what is more besides also not only...but also...
too in addition
6)表舉例：
for example for instance for one thing that is
to illustrate as an illustration a case in point
7)表解釋：
as a matter of fact frankly speaking in this case namely
in other words英語中18大激勵人心的豪情壯語
8)表總結：
in summary in a word thus as has been said
in brief in conclusion altogether in other words
to conclude in fact finally in simpler terms
indeed in short in particular that is
in other words of course on the whole to put it differently
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4、贅述
高考英語改錯題中的贅述是指在一些固定表達中或從上下文邏輯來看用了多余的詞，從而使句子表達不合規(guī)范或造成邏輯上的重復。（注：帶下劃線的詞為多余的詞，即需刪去的詞）
�。�1）today i visited the smiths－my first time visit to an american family. time
（2）in fact，they are planning to visit china in next year. in
（3）first，let me tell you something more about myself. more
（4）we practise for three times every week and often watch football match on tv together. for
�。�5）now i can't watch much television，but a few years ago i was used to watch it every night. much
�。�6）whenever i see them i will often think of my english teacher. often
�。�7）i was so tired that i fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. at
5、固定結構（固定句型、固定短語、固定搭配）
所謂固定結構是指英語中一些不能隨意更改的習慣表達。如固定短語中的詞不能冗缺，固定搭配要前后一致等。
（1）it was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. of
�。�2）i use to play ping －pong a lot in my sparetime，but... used
�。�3）some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. one
（4）...but the others spent a lot∧time arguing and ... of
�。�5）when i was on the stage the next day，i felt so nervous as i shook like a leaf. that
（6）suddenly，i caught a sight of my english teacher in the crowd. a（注：a為需刪去的詞）
（7）like most of my schoolmates，i have neither brothers nor sisters—in any other words，i am an only child. any（any需為刪去的詞）
9、易混淆的詞或詞組
易混淆的詞既包括詞意相同或相近的同義詞、近義詞，也包括外形相似、意義有別的詞組。易混淆詞或詞組的辨析也是高考改錯題中不容忽視的部分。
（1）...but now i am interesting in football. interested
�。�2）we must keep in mind that we play for the team instead∧ourselves. of
�。�3）now i can't watch television，but a few years ago i was used to watch it every night. was（注：was為需刪去的詞）
（4）unfortunately，there are too many people among my family. in
�。�5）they did not want me to do any work at family；they want me to... home
�。�6）do they really understand their daughter？what things are in other homes，i wonder. how
�。�7）evening came down. down（注：down為需刪去的詞）
連詞及與并置問題
連詞連接的前后兩部分是否合乎邏輯；并列連詞所連接的前后兩部分結構是否等同。這兩點是解答與連詞及其相關問題的高考英語改錯題的關鍵所在。
�。�1）it was very kind of them to meet me at the station and drove me to their home. drive
（2）playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. gives
�。�3）she was smiling but nodding at me. and
（4）i remembered her words and clam down. calmed
�。�5）it looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. or
�。�6）the food was expensive and the service was good. but
�。�7）as we climbed the mountain，we fed monkeys，visiting temples and told stories. visited
怎樣的流程？審題——草稿——成文——檢查
第一步，審題。
拿到題目后，手中拿鉛筆，手腦眼嘴并用，開始審題�？搭}目的要求是什么，要點是什么，特殊要求是什么。譬如你是叫李華，還是隨便一個名字？要議論文還是記敘文？對分幾段寫有無要求？等等。諸如此類的硬性要求信息，都最好用鉛筆劃下來，以免出錯，也許你一開始會記得，可隨著時間的流逝，你會不會因緊張而遺忘這些信息呢？還是小心為妙。邊看最好邊張嘴默讀，這樣就不會遺漏或忽略任何一個字了。
第二步，草稿。
有的同學怕出錯，全文都打草稿再謄寫，我姑且認為不太可取，畢竟考場時間寶貴，即使我有四十分鐘時間寫作文也不敢貿然這么做，更何況考場時我們留給作文的時間往往一再被壓縮。有的同學不打草稿，我認為更不太可取。一來容易出錯，二來邊寫邊想思維不連貫，即使思維連貫也無法審詞酌句，展現(xiàn)自己最好的一面，容易后悔。
草稿怎么打，我的做法是，一打結構，二打關鍵詞，三打句式。
1.結構就是你打算分幾段寫，每段都寫什么？哪段轉哪段承哪段起合？心里都要是有譜的。
2.關鍵詞：結構擬定后，迅速在草稿紙上寫下自己這篇作文可能用到的一些關鍵詞。包括一些漂亮的詞和自己可能會忘記的詞。主要是動詞和名詞。
譬如一省作文題： 假設你的名字是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)招募志愿者。你希望成為志愿者。申請信的格式已經寫好了，你直接寫內容就可以。你的個人情況：年齡性別學歷，個人條件。英語好，愛好體育，擅長交際，樂于助人。承諾提供最佳服務。
關鍵詞就是學歷、愛好、擅長、樂于、承諾，和你對這篇作文初步構思時想到的一些詞。先把這些詞（指詞的英文表達）寫在紙上。有一些詞的拼寫，譬如學歷，可能你本身就記得不是特別清楚，這時一定要在開始寫作文前先把它寫下來，以免一會因干擾而遺忘。
然后，別著急，這些詞不一定就是你作文中要用的詞啊。可能看到聰明這個關鍵詞時，你最初寫下的往往是clever，再仔細想想，你是不是又想到了smart,deligient好多詞，挑個漂亮和合適的用吧。再比如轉折，你寫了but，這會再想想，是不是又有一堆表示轉折的詞在你腦里打轉呢？挑一個吧。千萬別用but.
3.句式：詞寫下來了，其實你構建這篇作文的建筑材料就到位了，下步就是要把它們蓋成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陳述句把它們在頭腦中過一遍，然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陳述句改成問句？能不能用上一個雙重否定句？能不能用一個主語從句套定語從句的長句？能不能用一個插入語？等等。把你高中三年的英語積累展示出來。在草稿紙上同樣標注。
三.正式寫。這樣的草稿打完后，就要快快寫了。注意，英語作文的卷面簡直太重要了，一定要把字寫整齊，寫大。沒有把握的詞和句子不用，寧可忍痛割愛也不冒犯錯的風險。別忘了遵守你最初用鉛筆劃下的題目的規(guī)定。
四.檢查。注意，最最重要的一步來了。盡管很小心，可是我們寫英語作文還是會犯下很多錯誤。單詞拼寫的，大小寫的，等等。這些錯誤會極大破壞我們在閱卷老師心目中的形象，一定要堅決誓死消滅。即使時間再緊，請務必留下1——2分鐘檢查作文的時間，消除隱性錯誤，避免自殺行為。
需要說明的是，英語的開頭和結尾是最關鍵的，尤其是開頭�；旧�，不跑題，遵守題目要求，一個漂亮的開頭，一個還過得去的結尾，2-3個高級詞匯，1-2個漂亮的句子，加上整齊的字跡，作文的分就不會低了哦。所以，精心為你的作文想個漂亮的開頭吧，切記哦：）
高考英語作文增分的“亮點”
文章的連貫性和緊湊感是高考書面表達的一個重要評分標準，滿分作文有個共性，就是有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，為此，學會使用關聯(lián)詞，是提升書面表達質量的重要策略之一。
有的同學在作文中使用過多簡單句，成了簡單句堆砌；有的寫復雜句時，動輒用so， and，then，but，or，however，yet等非但達不到豐富表達方式的目的，反而使句子結構松散、呆板。為了避免這種現(xiàn)象，可以通過使用不同的關聯(lián)詞，不僅能夠豐富句型，而且還能夠把思想表達得更清楚，意義更連貫。
■ 金題解析
當前不少文學作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請你以“film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點寫一篇英語短文：
看電影：省時、有趣、易懂
2. 讀原著：細節(jié)更多、語言優(yōu)美
3. 我的看法及理由
【注意】
1. 詞數(shù)：100~120 文章題目和開頭已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）。
2. 參考詞匯： original work 或 book in the original （原著）
film or book, which do you prefer?
some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
【寫作指導】
這是一篇提綱式半開放性作文。寫作時，我們既要注意漢語提示的要點，又要準確表達自己的觀點。因此，要分兩段寫出兩種不同的觀點，在最后一段寫出自己的觀點。高考書面表達新評分標準在語言運用上對同學們提出了更高的要求，即在考查短文語言表達準確性的基礎上，進一步強調用詞的得體性、表達方式的多樣性及語言的連貫性。因此，在寫作時，我們一定要盡可能多使用高級詞匯和復雜句型，要恰當使用連接詞、過渡詞，這樣的文章才能出采，才能得高分。
【參考范文】
some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. the reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
some others have just the opposite opinion. they think that they can get more detailed information from the original. meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
personally, i agree with the second view. actually i have more reasons for it. i think i can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more, i am able to better understand the author’s ideas. in a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
【精彩點擊】
寫作要求我們就選擇看電影還是讀原著談談看法。作者在做到了要點齊全，內容充實，語言規(guī)范，語法正確的同時，較好地運用句子間的連接詞，從而使文章結構嚴謹，層次分明，邏輯性強。
�、俚谝欢沃�，besides一詞的使用，多角度說明人們選擇看電影的理由；
�、诘诙沃校琺eanwhile一詞的使用，增強了語言表達的說服力；
�、鄣谌沃校瑆hat’s more一詞的使用，使作者在說明自己觀點時呈現(xiàn)較強的邏輯性和感染力。in a word用于總結前文，突出了主題。
■ 關聯(lián)詞的應用
文章段落之間的邏輯關系可以用啟、承、轉、合來概括�！皢ⅰ本褪情_頭, “承”是承接，“轉”是轉折，“合”是綜合或總結。
�。�1）用于“啟”的關聯(lián)詞語通常用在段落或文章的開頭： first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, nowadays, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately, currently等。例：
�、賜owadays，a heated debate （discussion） about private cars is under way in china.
時下，人們正議論著關于私家車的話題。
�、趇n the recent few years, millions of fast food restaurants have mushroomed all over china.
近幾年，中國涌現(xiàn)上百萬快餐店。
�、踓urrently， there is a widespread concern over increasing traffic accidents.
時下，不斷增加的交通事故已引起人們的廣泛關注。
④first of all， doing exercise every day is of the utmost importance in keeping fit.
首先，每日鍛煉對保持健康至關重要。
�、輌enerally speaking， the more you practice， the more skillfully you can write in english.
一般來說，多實踐，英語的寫作能力就越強。
�。�2）用于“承”的關聯(lián)詞語通常用在段落中的第一個擴展句中： second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt等。例：
�、賢he answer to this problem involves many factors. first, . . . next, . . . last, . . .
解決問題的方法涉及兩方面，首先，……其次，……最后，……
�、趖he following factors account for the problem. on the one hand, . . . on the other hand, . . .
以下原因導致了這一問題， 一方面， ……另一方面，……
③as a matter of fact, it is health rather than wealth that counts.
事實上，健康才是最重要。
④what is more serious is that we do not cherish the wildlife.
更嚴重的是，我們不珍惜野生動物。
⑤in addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.
此外，我們不應忽視每個人都想要一個溫馨祥和的社會。
（3）用于“轉”的關聯(lián)詞語通常用在段落中的第二個擴展句中： but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate（無論如何）, nevertheless（雖然如此）, otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, in spite of ..., yet, instead等。例：
�、賖owever, this idea is now being questioned by more and more experts.
這一想法卻受到越來越多的專家質疑。
�、赽ut just as a coin has two sides, tourism inevitably has its disadvantages.
凡事都有兩方面，旅游不可避免地有其缺陷。
③parents complain their children are behaving unreasonably while the children declare their parents to be old-fashioned.
父母抱怨孩子行為不端，孩子則認為父母太落伍。
�、躨n spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completed realized.
盡管有些變化，婦女解放仍未完全實現(xiàn)。
�、輔n the other hand, some examinations fail to measure how the students have really studied.
相反，有些考試卻難以真正衡量學生學識。
（4）用于“合”的關聯(lián)詞語通常用在段落的結論句或文章的結論段中：in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking，to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus，after all, eventually, hence, in sum（總之）, on the whole（就整體而言）, to sum up等。例：
①last but no least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.
最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助長青少年犯罪的原因。
�、趂or these reasons, we can conclude that receiving college education is wise.
基于這些原因，我們可以得出結論：接受大學教育是明智的。
�、踭herefore，it takes longer time and more energy to communicate in written english than in oral english.
因此，書面語交流比口語需要更多時間和精力。
�、躨n short， environmental pollution is the major problem to be solved to make our world a better place in which to live.
總之，要想生活安逸，必須解決環(huán)境污染問題。
�、輋rom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.
通過以上討論，我們可以得出結論：自行車的優(yōu)點遠大于缺點，并且在現(xiàn)代社會它仍將發(fā)揮重要作用。
高考英語作文精彩短語150條
1 欣賞大自然的風景 to appreciate the scenery of nature
2 培養(yǎng)公德心 to cultivate the public mindedness
3 維護健康 to maintain health
4 保護環(huán)境 to protect the environment
5 開拓視野 to broaden the horizon
6 開拓心胸 to broaden the mind
7 調劑生活 to make life pleasant
8 松散身心 to relax oneself
9 啟迪心靈 to enlighten the mind
10 灌輸知識 to impart knowledge into someone
11 追求理想 to seek after the ideal
12 實現(xiàn)抱負 to realize one's ambition
13 守信用 to keep one's promise
14 跟上時代 to keep up with the times
15 欣賞古典文學 to appreciate the classical literature
16 學習吉他 to learn guitar
17 陶冶品德 to cultivate the character
18 貢獻國家 to contribute oneself to the country
19 鍛煉身體 to strengthen, exercise the body
20 缺乏休閑活動 to lack recreations
21 作筆記 to take notes
22 使用參考書 to use reference books
23 關心社會 to be concerned about the society
24 服從校規(guī) to follow the rules of the school
25 盡身為學生的責任 to fulfill one's duty as a student
26 克服困難 to overcome the difficulty
27 面臨困難 to be confronted with the difficulty
28 渡過困境 to weather the storm
29 走快捷方式 to cut the corner
30 量脈搏 to feel the pulse
31 開藥方 to prescribe the medicine
32 堅守原則 to stick to the principle
33 注意衛(wèi)生 to emphasize the importance of hygiene
34 亂丟垃圾 to litter; to scatter garbage
35 美化環(huán)境 to beautify the environment
36 種植樹木 to grow trees
37 防止污染 to prevent the pollution
38 提升生活質量 to promote the qualities of life
39 造成損害 to do damage to
40 對...有益 to benefit; to be beneficial to
41 對...有害 to be harmful to; to do harm to
42 任意停車 to park the car at random
43 制造噪音 to make noises
44 占用人行道 to occupy the sidewalk
45 妨礙交通 to hinder the traffic
46 排放污煙、廢氣 to belch smoke, exhaust, fume
47 造成不便 to cause inconvenience
48 造成混亂 to bring about the disorder
49 闖紅燈 to run through the red light
50 利用天橋 to make use of the overpass
51 查字典 to consult the dictionary
52 屏息 to hold one's breath
53 流淚 to shed tears
54 符合需要 to meet the demand
55 生根 to take root
56 產生結果 to bear fruit
57 打破沉默 to break the ice
58 氣餒 to lose heart; to get discouraged
59 振作 to pull oneself together; to take heart
60 采取步驟 to take steps; to take measures
61 緩和悲傷 to ease ( alleviate ) the sorrow
62 承受負擔 to bear the responsibility
63 考慮到 to make allowance for
64 把握機會 to seize the opportunity
65 跑腿 to run an errand
66 樹立楷模 to set a good example
67 接受教育 to receive education
68 提升生活的水平 to raise the standard of living
69 告辭 to take one's leave
70 有很深的了解 to have a deep understanding of
71 跟隨流行 to follow the fashion
72 提錢 to withdraw money
73 存錢 to deposit money
74 良心不安 the conscience stirs
75 自立 to be independent; to stand on one's own
76 英文很好 to have a good command of english
77 有廣泛的知識 to have a wide range of knowledge
78 喜愛藝術 to have a great liking for arts
79 扮演重要角色 to play an important role in
80 聊天 to have a chat with
81 有...才能 to have a talent for
82 選擇 to make a choice
83 有很大的影響 to have a great influence on
84 予人...很深的印象 to make a deep impression on
85 愚弄 to make a fool of
86 找借口 to make an excuse
87 給人搭便車 to give one a lift
88 打電話 to give someone a ring
89 冒險 to take chances
90 懷恨 to bear grudge against someone
91 牢記在心 to bear .....in mind
92 板著臉 to pull a long face
93 對...充耳不聞 to turn a deaf ear to
94 被開除 to be dismissed from school
95 生氣 to be angry with ( at )
96 負擔責任 to assume the responsibility
97 符合需要 to serve the purpose
98 變胖 to gain weight
99 有道理 to make sense
100 記日記 to keep a diary
101 盡己所能 to do what one can
102 擅長網球 to be at home in tennis
103 郊游 to go on an outing
104 消磨時間 to kill time
105 增加生活的情趣 to increase the pleasures of life
106 精神抖擻 to be ( feel ) refreshed
107 解除緊張和焦慮 to relieve the tension and anxiety
108 宣泄久積的情緒 to release the pent-up feelings
109 游手好閑 to fool around
110 準備考試 to prepare for the examination
111 參加課外活動 to take part in the club activities
112 無精打采的 to be listless
113 精力充沛的 to be vigorous, energetic
114 防臺 to guard against the typhoon
115 逃避現(xiàn)實 to escape the reality
116 達到目標 to achieve the aim
117 五育并重 to lay equal emphasis on the five disciplines
118 感到無聊 to feel ( be ) bored
119 感到剌激 to be excited
120 感到滿意 to be pleased, satisfied
121 感到失望 to be disappointed
122 感到振奮 to be encouraged, inspired
123 感到氣餒 to be discouraged, frustrated
124 感到疲倦的 to be exhausted
125 感到煩惱 to be worried, upset, disturbed, bothered
126 放棄理想 to abandon the ideal
127 奠定基礎 to lay the foundation
128 失去耐心 to lose patience
129 進步 to make progress
130 失去連絡 to lose track of
131 保持連絡 to keep in touch with
132 誤入歧途 to go astray
133 養(yǎng)成...的習慣 to make it a rule to; to cultivate the habit
134 統(tǒng)一中國 to reunify china
135 不辭辛勞 to take the pains to
136 遇到交通阻塞 to be caught in a traffic jam
137 給...教訓 to teach someone a lesson
138 改過自新 to turn over a new leaf
139 引以為樂 to take delight in
140 予...以打擊 to deal a heavy blow to
141 予...以威脅 to pose a threat to
142 取代 to take the place of
143 預作保留 to make the reservation
144 使...澈夜未眠 to cost someone a sleepless night
145 充滿喜悅 to be filled with joy
146 背誦 to learn....by heart
147 鼓勵 to encourage, inspire
148 產生不同 to make a great difference
149 犯法 to violate the law
150 不遺余力 to spare no efforts to