高考英語(yǔ)書面表達(dá)分類模板
敘事類
外出活動(dòng)、欣賞美景(日記)
we decided to go out for a picnic.
i had a pleasant outing with some of my classmates today.
early in the morning, we set off for the farm for a visit.
when we reached the farm, we were given a warm welcome.
they showed us around the farm(we were shown around the farm) , where we saw many kinds of plants.
we caught sight of a stream with green grass and beautiful flowers on both sides.
we were completely amazed at the wonder and the greatness of nature.(我們完全被大自然的奇妙和偉大折服了)
we jumped and shouted like innocent (天真的) children.
once on the top of the hill/the moment we got to the top of the hill, we were deeply struck/attracted by the beautiful scenery.
how we enjoyed the beautiful views from the top !
after being divided into groups, we set to work at once.
some of us were getting water, some (were) cutting the meat and vegetables, and others (were) sitting on the grass enjoying music.
birds were singing sweetly in the trees and butterflies were dancing gracefully in the garden/fields.
when lunch time came, we sat on the grassland, eating and drinking happily.
the meal was so delicious that we enjoyed it very much.
we sang and danced together to the music.
three hours had passed before we knew it.
the time passed quickly before we knew it.
it was time for us to go back when the sun started to go down.
i spent the whole afternoon with our cousins, enjoying the fine scenery and fresh air in the country.
at about four o’clock in the afternoon, we said goodbye to them
at four o’clock in the afternoon we had to return.
they came out to see us until we disappeared in the distance.
on the way back, we were laughing and talking all the time.
what a wonderful weekend we had!
we enjoyed ourselves very much.
through these out-of class activities we can learn a lot of things that can’t be learned in class.
although we were tired, we felt very happy. i think it’s our duty to cover our country with green.
意外事故、天災(zāi)人禍
i was walking along the street when a terrible accident happened in the street.
one day something unpleasant happened.
the girl fell off her bike and was badly hurt.
fortunately, the injured people were sent to hospital without delay.
an elderly man was hit by a car while he was crossing the road.
he fell down to the ground with a cry.
the girl was too frightened to move.
it was soon found out that the driver had drunk too much wine before driving.
the accident delayed all the traffic for an hour and caused the damage of $80,000
lots of people lost their lives in the floods.
the big floods, which occurred in 1998, caused great losses.
a big fire broke out in an office building in a busy street. the cause of the fire has been unknown. it is being investigated.
the fire lasted about two hours and was finally put out in the afternoon.
as a result, the three-storied building was destroyed, 50 people were killed, and more than 200 were injured.
up to the present, the cause of the accident is still unknown.
助人為樂(lè)、 舍己救人
without thinking about her own safety, she rushed out and pulled him back.
he hurried to school, reaching the schoolyard quite out of breath.
she told the teacher what had happened to her on the way to school.
the blind man was out of danger, but she lost her life./got injured.
he was praised for what he had done.
she offered us some gifts, but we refused to accept them.
they all thanked him for his help.
wondering what to do, tom saw a policeman.
we hurried to the policeman for help.
with the help of the policeman, we found the owner of the bag.
a clever idea came to his mind.
then he put his idea into practice.
i left the hospital without giving my name.
this may be the most unforgettable experience of my life.
he felt happy because he had done a good deed.
it was not until then that i really understood the meaning of the proverb:
“ helping others is the source of happiness.”
he will always be remembered as a hero.
人物寫照、生平事跡
he was from a poor peasant’s family.
he is about 1.72 meters in height
by the age of 14, he had taught himself advanced mathematics.
she is already in her fifties, but she looks younger for her age.
he is short and thin with a pair of thick glasses.
she is tall and slim with big dark eyes and black hair.
my english teacher, miss zhang, is a middle-aged woman.
she often helps those who have difficulty in doing their homework.
with her help, i have caught up with my classmates.
at the age of eight he became a member of the diving team in guangdong province. a few years later, he won a gold medal at the 11th asian games and became a world champion.
he has his own way of teaching.
he has much knowledge and good at teaching.
all these years he has been working hard.
many times he has been praised for his excellent work.
he gets on very well with us students.
he is not only our good teacher but also our good friend.
he is honest and always ready to help others. that’s why we made him monitor.
we all considered her pronunciation to be the best of all.
he is a worthy person for us to learn from.
he graduated from qinghua university in 1982.
an american company wanted to employ him with high pay, but he refused.
he received a doctor’s degree in 1988.
he is strict with us and careful in his work.
he won the first prize in the physics contest.
he devoted all his life to education.
he is loved and respected by us all.
she is considered as one of the best teachers year by year.
with his help, we have made great progress in our studies.
he will always be remembered as a great leader, a wise and warm-hearted man.
he is regarded as a fighter by most of the people in the world.
miss zhang is such a good teacher that we all love her very much.
such was elbert einstein, a man of great achievements.
議論文
規(guī)勸惡習(xí)、見(jiàn)解評(píng)說(shuō)
different people have got different attitudes towards failure.
different people have different opinions about smoking.
opinions are divided on the question.
60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fee.
on the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged.
there are always two aspects(方面) to any situation.
everything lives with opposite forces. the same can be said about modern technology, such as internet.
some (foolish) people seem to think/believe/hold the view that smoking is an enjoyment. but in fact, smoking does great harm to people’s health.
we must try to persuade people to give up smoking.
it is investigated that 30% of the computers are used to play games.
according to a recent investigation, ……
playing games on computers can be a waste of time.
it’s been proved that early rising can make people full of energy.
early rising helps to keep fit.
as the english proverb says, “early to bed and early to rise, make a man healthy, wealthy and wise.”
experts suggest that people should have regular sports every day.
study shows that cigarette smoking can cause cancers.
in addition to health problems, there are other reasons to give up smoking.
from the above, i come to the conclusion that smoking does great harm to our health.
from now on, we ought to break away from the bad habit and form a good one.
millions of smokers die from illness caused by smoking tobacco.
my suggestions are as follows.
as future builders of our country, we should make full use of our
time to work hard ,and do things to benefit our country.
as we all know, spending too much time on tv may have bad effects on our work and health, especially on our eyes.
therefore, we should be aware of(注意) when to watch, how to watch, and what to watch.
there are many ways of keeping good health.
nowadays, taxies bring people a lot of convenience, but also cause a lot of trouble.
regulations should be laid down for taxi drivers.(應(yīng)該專門為出租車司機(jī)指定交通規(guī)則)
now more and more students are getting near-sighted in schools,
because they have paid little attention to the care of their eyes.
寫作的七項(xiàng)基本原則
一、長(zhǎng)短句原則工作還得一張一馳呢，老讓讀者讀長(zhǎng)句，累死人！寫一個(gè)短小精辟的句子，相反，卻可以起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末，也可以揭示主題：
as a creature, i eat; as a man, i read. although one action is to meet the primary need of my body and the other is to satisfy the intellectual need of mind, they are in a way quite similar.
如此可見(jiàn)，長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，抑揚(yáng)頓挫，豈不爽哉？牢記！
強(qiáng)烈建議：在文章第一段（開頭）用一長(zhǎng)一短，且先長(zhǎng)后短；在文章主體部分，要先用一個(gè)短句解釋主要意思，然后在闡述幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)的時(shí)候采用先短后長(zhǎng)的句群形式，定會(huì)讓主體部分妙筆生輝！文章結(jié)尾一般用一長(zhǎng)一短就可以了。
主題句原則國(guó)有其君，家有其主，文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無(wú)首”之感！相信各位讀過(guò)一些破爛文學(xué)，故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi)，結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂！不知所云！所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個(gè)主題句，放在文章的開頭（保險(xiǎn)型）或者結(jié)尾，讓讀者一目了然，必會(huì)平安無(wú)事！
特別提示：隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的！
to begin with, you must work hard at your lessons and be fully prepared before the exam（主題句）. without sufficient preparation, you can hardly expect to answer allthe questions correctly.
一二三原則領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)…如此羅嗦。可畢竟還是條理清楚�？脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^(guò)這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來(lái)判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚，條理自然。破解方法很簡(jiǎn)單，只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。
first, second, third, last（不推薦，原因：俗）
firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally（不推薦，原因：俗）
the first, the second, the third, the last（不推薦，原因：俗）
in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly（不推薦，原因：俗）
5）to begin with, then, furthermore, finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）
6）to start with, next, in addition, finally（強(qiáng)烈推薦）
7）first and foremost, besides, last but not least（強(qiáng)烈推薦）
8）most important of all, moreover, finally
9）on the one hand, on the other hand（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）
10）for one thing, for another thing（適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況）
建議：不僅僅在寫作中注意，平時(shí)說(shuō)話的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚！
短語(yǔ)優(yōu)先原則
寫作時(shí)，尤其是在考試時(shí)，如果使用短語(yǔ)，有兩個(gè)好處：其一、用短語(yǔ)會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn)，如果老師們看到你的文章太簡(jiǎn)單，看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語(yǔ)，必然會(huì)看你低一等。相反，如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)—精彩的短語(yǔ)，那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路，只有湊字?jǐn)?shù)，怎么辦？用短語(yǔ)是一個(gè)辦法！比如：
i cannot bear it.
可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：i cannot put up with it.
i want it. 可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：i am looking forward to it. 這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加，表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確�！�
五、多實(shí)少虛原則原因很簡(jiǎn)單，寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西，不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞。我這里所說(shuō)的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說(shuō)一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候，不應(yīng)該之說(shuō)nice這樣空洞的詞，應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous, humorous, interesting, smart, gentle, warm-hearted, hospital之類的形象詞。再比如：
走出房間，general的詞是：walk out of the room
但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：slip out of the room
小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：sail out of the room
小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：dance out of the room
老人走出房間應(yīng)該說(shuō)：stagger out of the room
所以多用實(shí)詞，少用虛詞，文章將會(huì)大放異彩！
多變句式原則
加法（串聯(lián)）
都希望寫下很長(zhǎng)的句子，像個(gè)老外似的，可就是怕寫錯(cuò)，怎么辦，最保險(xiǎn)的寫長(zhǎng)句的方法就是這些，可以在任何句子之間加and,但最好是前后的句子又先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說(shuō)：
i enjoy music and he is fond of playing guitar.
如果是二者并列的，我們可以用一個(gè)超級(jí)句式：
not only the fur coat is soft, but it is also warm.
其它的短語(yǔ)可以用：
besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover
轉(zhuǎn)折（拐彎抹角）
批評(píng)某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說(shuō)說(shuō)他的優(yōu)點(diǎn)，然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題，再說(shuō)缺點(diǎn)，這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn)，可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢，我們說(shuō)話的時(shí)候，只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來(lái)點(diǎn)廢話，注意二者之間用個(gè)專這次就夠了。
the car was quite old, yet it was in excellent condition.
the coat was thin, but it was warm.
更多的短語(yǔ)：
despite that, still, however, nevertheless, in spite of, despite, notwithstanding 因果（so, so, so）
昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩，然后我主動(dòng)搭訕，然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d，然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了，然后我們成為了朋友…可見(jiàn)，講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序，先什么，后什么，所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見(jiàn)了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系！
the snow began to fall, so we went home.
更多短語(yǔ)：
then, therefore, consequently, accordingly, hence, as a result, for this reason, so that
失衡句（頭重腳輕，或者頭輕腳重）
有些人腦袋大，身體小，或者有些人腦袋小，身體大，雖然我們不希望長(zhǎng)成這個(gè)樣子，可如果真的是這樣了，也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子，就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語(yǔ)從句，表語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句的變形�！ �
舉例：this is what i can do.
whether he can go with us or not is not sure.
同樣主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)、表語(yǔ)可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分：
when to go, why he goes away…
5）附加（多此一舉）
如果有了老婆，總會(huì)遇到這樣的情況，當(dāng)你再講某個(gè)人的時(shí)候，她會(huì)插一句說(shuō)，我昨天見(jiàn)過(guò)他；或者說(shuō)，就是某某某，如果把老婆的話插入到我們的話里面，那就是定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)從句或者是插入語(yǔ)�！ �
the man whom you met yesterday is a friend of mine.
i don’t enjoy that book you are reading.
mr liu, our oral english teacher, is easy-going.
其實(shí)很簡(jiǎn)單，同位語(yǔ)--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成；定語(yǔ)從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中，但是whom or that關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前�！ �
6）排比（排山倒海句）
文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過(guò)于此，如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話，那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句，一個(gè)個(gè)得對(duì)偶句，一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式，一個(gè)個(gè)地詞，一個(gè)個(gè)的短語(yǔ)，如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢(shì)！
whether your tastes are modern or traditional, sophisticated or simple, there is plenty in london for you.
nowadays, energy can be obtained through various sources such as oil, coal, natural gas, solar heat, the wind and ocean tides.
we have got to study hard, to enlarge our scope of knowledge, to realize our potentials and to pay for our life.（氣勢(shì)恢宏）
要想寫出如此氣勢(shì)恢宏的句子非用排比不可！
挑戰(zhàn)極限原則既然十挑戰(zhàn)極限，必然是比較難的，但是并非不可攀！
原理：在學(xué)生的文章中，很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子，其實(shí)也很簡(jiǎn)單，只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì)，它就是分詞的一種特殊形式，分詞要求主語(yǔ)一致，而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如：
the weather being fine, a large number of people went to climb the western hills.
africa is the second largest continent, its size being about three times that of china.如果您可一些出這樣的句子，不得高分才怪！ 三、文章主體段落的三大殺手锏
一、舉實(shí)例思維短路，舉實(shí)例！提出一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)，舉實(shí)例！提出一個(gè)方案，舉實(shí)例！而且者也是我們揭示一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)最好的方式，任何情況下，只要我們無(wú)法繼續(xù)文章，不管三七二十一，盡管舉例子！
in order to attract more customers, advertisers have adopted every possible simulative factor in making ads, such as sound, light, colours, cartoon films and human performance. for instance, to advertise a certain food, advertisers will ask an actor or actress to sit at a table and devour the seemingly delicious food while they fime him or her.
更多句型：
to take…as an example, one example is…, another exampleis…, for example
做比較方法：寫完一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，比較與之相似的；又寫完一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，再比較與之相反的；
世界上沒(méi)有同樣的指紋，沒(méi)有相同的樹葉，文章亦同，只有通過(guò)比較，你才會(huì)發(fā)現(xiàn)二者的相同點(diǎn)（through comparison）和不同點(diǎn)（through contrast）。下面是一些短語(yǔ)：
相似的比較：
in comparison, likewise, similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較：
on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead,
nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,…
三、換言之沒(méi)話說(shuō)了，可以換一句話再說(shuō)，讓你的文章在多一些字，或者文鄒鄒地說(shuō)，是讓讀者更充分的理解你的觀點(diǎn)。
實(shí)際就是重復(fù)重復(fù)再重復(fù)！下面的句子實(shí)際上就三個(gè)字i love you!
i am enthusiastic about you. that is to say, i love you.
i am wild about you. in other words, i have fallen in love with you.
或者上面我們舉過(guò)的例子：
i cannot bear it.
可以用短語(yǔ)表達(dá)：i cannot put up with it.因此可以這樣說(shuō)：i cannot bear it. that is to say, i cannot put up with it or i am fed up with it.
更多短語(yǔ)： in more difficult language, in simpler words, put it more simply.
雅思寫作常用單詞----常用的連接詞
常用的連接詞:
1)表層次:
first, firstly to begin with further in the first place
second, secondly to start with still furthermore
third, thirdly what is more last last but not least
also and then next besides
and equally important too moreover
besides in addition finally
2)表轉(zhuǎn)折；
by contrast although though yet
at the same time but despite the fact that even so
in contrast nevertheless even though for all that
notwithstanding on the contrary however in spite of
on the other hand otherwise instead still
regardless
3)表因果；
therefore consequently because of for the reason
thus hence due to owing to
so accordingly thanks to on this account
since as on that account in this way
for as a result as a consequence
4）表讓步：
still nevertheless concession granted naturally
in spite of all the same of course despite
even so after all
5)表遞近：
furthermore moreover likewise what is more besides also not only...but also...
too in addition
6)表舉例：
for example for instance for one thing that is
to illustrate as an illustration a case in point
7)表解釋：
as a matter of fact frankly speaking in this case namely
in other words英語(yǔ)中18大激勵(lì)人心的豪情壯語(yǔ)
8)表總結(jié)：
in summary in a word thus as has been said
in brief in conclusion altogether in other words
to conclude in fact finally in simpler terms
indeed in short in particular that is
in other words of course on the whole to put it differently
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4、贅述
高考英語(yǔ)改錯(cuò)題中的贅述是指在一些固定表達(dá)中或從上下文邏輯來(lái)看用了多余的詞，從而使句子表達(dá)不合規(guī)范或造成邏輯上的重復(fù)。（注：帶下劃線的詞為多余的詞，即需刪去的詞）
（1）today i visited the smiths－my first time visit to an american family. time
�。�2）in fact，they are planning to visit china in next year. in
�。�3）first，let me tell you something more about myself. more
�。�4）we practise for three times every week and often watch football match on tv together. for
�。�5）now i can't watch much television，but a few years ago i was used to watch it every night. much
�。�6）whenever i see them i will often think of my english teacher. often
�。�7）i was so tired that i fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. at
5、固定結(jié)構(gòu)（固定句型、固定短語(yǔ)、固定搭配）
所謂固定結(jié)構(gòu)是指英語(yǔ)中一些不能隨意更改的習(xí)慣表達(dá)。如固定短語(yǔ)中的詞不能冗缺，固定搭配要前后一致等。
�。�1）it was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. of
（2）i use to play ping －pong a lot in my sparetime，but... used
（3）some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. one
�。�4）...but the others spent a lot∧time arguing and ... of
�。�5）when i was on the stage the next day，i felt so nervous as i shook like a leaf. that
�。�6）suddenly，i caught a sight of my english teacher in the crowd. a（注：a為需刪去的詞）
（7）like most of my schoolmates，i have neither brothers nor sisters—in any other words，i am an only child. any（any需為刪去的詞）
9、易混淆的詞或詞組
易混淆的詞既包括詞意相同或相近的同義詞、近義詞，也包括外形相似、意義有別的詞組。易混淆詞或詞組的辨析也是高考改錯(cuò)題中不容忽視的部分。
�。�1）...but now i am interesting in football. interested
（2）we must keep in mind that we play for the team instead∧ourselves. of
�。�3）now i can't watch television，but a few years ago i was used to watch it every night. was（注：was為需刪去的詞）
�。�4）unfortunately，there are too many people among my family. in
�。�5）they did not want me to do any work at family；they want me to... home
�。�6）do they really understand their daughter？what things are in other homes，i wonder. how
�。�7）evening came down. down（注：down為需刪去的詞）
連詞及與并置問(wèn)題
連詞連接的前后兩部分是否合乎邏輯；并列連詞所連接的前后兩部分結(jié)構(gòu)是否等同。這兩點(diǎn)是解答與連詞及其相關(guān)問(wèn)題的高考英語(yǔ)改錯(cuò)題的關(guān)鍵所在。
�。�1）it was very kind of them to meet me at the station and drove me to their home. drive
（2）playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. gives
�。�3）she was smiling but nodding at me. and
�。�4）i remembered her words and clam down. calmed
（5）it looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. or
�。�6）the food was expensive and the service was good. but
�。�7）as we climbed the mountain，we fed monkeys，visiting temples and told stories. visited
怎樣的流程？審題——草稿——成文——檢查
第一步，審題。
拿到題目后，手中拿鉛筆，手腦眼嘴并用，開始審題�？搭}目的要求是什么，要點(diǎn)是什么，特殊要求是什么。譬如你是叫李華，還是隨便一個(gè)名字？要議論文還是記敘文？對(duì)分幾段寫有無(wú)要求？等等。諸如此類的硬性要求信息，都最好用鉛筆劃下來(lái)，以免出錯(cuò)，也許你一開始會(huì)記得，可隨著時(shí)間的流逝，你會(huì)不會(huì)因緊張而遺忘這些信息呢？還是小心為妙。邊看最好邊張嘴默讀，這樣就不會(huì)遺漏或忽略任何一個(gè)字了。
第二步，草稿。
有的同學(xué)怕出錯(cuò)，全文都打草稿再謄寫，我姑且認(rèn)為不太可取，畢竟考場(chǎng)時(shí)間寶貴，即使我有四十分鐘時(shí)間寫作文也不敢貿(mào)然這么做，更何況考場(chǎng)時(shí)我們留給作文的時(shí)間往往一再被壓縮。有的同學(xué)不打草稿，我認(rèn)為更不太可取。一來(lái)容易出錯(cuò)，二來(lái)邊寫邊想思維不連貫，即使思維連貫也無(wú)法審詞酌句，展現(xiàn)自己最好的一面，容易后悔。
草稿怎么打，我的做法是，一打結(jié)構(gòu)，二打關(guān)鍵詞，三打句式。
1.結(jié)構(gòu)就是你打算分幾段寫，每段都寫什么？哪段轉(zhuǎn)哪段承哪段起合？心里都要是有譜的。
2.關(guān)鍵詞：結(jié)構(gòu)擬定后，迅速在草稿紙上寫下自己這篇作文可能用到的一些關(guān)鍵詞。包括一些漂亮的詞和自己可能會(huì)忘記的詞。主要是動(dòng)詞和名詞。
譬如一省作文題： 假設(shè)你的名字是李華，亞洲冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)招募志愿者。你希望成為志愿者。申請(qǐng)信的格式已經(jīng)寫好了，你直接寫內(nèi)容就可以。你的個(gè)人情況：年齡性別學(xué)歷，個(gè)人條件。英語(yǔ)好，愛(ài)好體育，擅長(zhǎng)交際，樂(lè)于助人。承諾提供最佳服務(wù)。
關(guān)鍵詞就是學(xué)歷、愛(ài)好、擅長(zhǎng)、樂(lè)于、承諾，和你對(duì)這篇作文初步構(gòu)思時(shí)想到的一些詞。先把這些詞（指詞的英文表達(dá)）寫在紙上。有一些詞的拼寫，譬如學(xué)歷，可能你本身就記得不是特別清楚，這時(shí)一定要在開始寫作文前先把它寫下來(lái)，以免一會(huì)因干擾而遺忘。
然后，別著急，這些詞不一定就是你作文中要用的詞啊�？赡芸吹铰斆鬟@個(gè)關(guān)鍵詞時(shí)，你最初寫下的往往是clever，再仔細(xì)想想，你是不是又想到了smart,deligient好多詞，挑個(gè)漂亮和合適的用吧。再比如轉(zhuǎn)折，你寫了but，這會(huì)再想想，是不是又有一堆表示轉(zhuǎn)折的詞在你腦里打轉(zhuǎn)呢？挑一個(gè)吧。千萬(wàn)別用but.
3.句式：詞寫下來(lái)了，其實(shí)你構(gòu)建這篇作文的建筑材料就到位了，下步就是要把它們蓋成漂亮的作文。先用最普通的陳述句把它們?cè)陬^腦中過(guò)一遍，然后看看都能改成什么句式。能不能把一句陳述句改成問(wèn)句？能不能用上一個(gè)雙重否定句？能不能用一個(gè)主語(yǔ)從句套定語(yǔ)從句的長(zhǎng)句？能不能用一個(gè)插入語(yǔ)？等等。把你高中三年的英語(yǔ)積累展示出來(lái)。在草稿紙上同樣標(biāo)注。
三.正式寫。這樣的草稿打完后，就要快快寫了。注意，英語(yǔ)作文的卷面簡(jiǎn)直太重要了，一定要把字寫整齊，寫大。沒(méi)有把握的詞和句子不用，寧可忍痛割愛(ài)也不冒犯錯(cuò)的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)。別忘了遵守你最初用鉛筆劃下的題目的規(guī)定。
四.檢查。注意，最最重要的一步來(lái)了。盡管很小心，可是我們寫英語(yǔ)作文還是會(huì)犯下很多錯(cuò)誤。單詞拼寫的，大小寫的，等等。這些錯(cuò)誤會(huì)極大破壞我們?cè)陂喚砝蠋熜哪恐械男蜗�，一定要�?jiān)決誓死消滅。即使時(shí)間再緊，請(qǐng)務(wù)必留下1——2分鐘檢查作文的時(shí)間，消除隱性錯(cuò)誤，避免自殺行為。
需要說(shuō)明的是，英語(yǔ)的開頭和結(jié)尾是最關(guān)鍵的，尤其是開頭。基本上，不跑題，遵守題目要求，一個(gè)漂亮的開頭，一個(gè)還過(guò)得去的結(jié)尾，2-3個(gè)高級(jí)詞匯，1-2個(gè)漂亮的句子，加上整齊的字跡，作文的分就不會(huì)低了哦。所以，精心為你的作文想個(gè)漂亮的開頭吧，切記哦：）
高考英語(yǔ)作文增分的“亮點(diǎn)”
文章的連貫性和緊湊感是高考書面表達(dá)的一個(gè)重要評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，滿分作文有個(gè)共性，就是有效地使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，為此，學(xué)會(huì)使用關(guān)聯(lián)詞，是提升書面表達(dá)質(zhì)量的重要策略之一。
有的同學(xué)在作文中使用過(guò)多簡(jiǎn)單句，成了簡(jiǎn)單句堆砌；有的寫復(fù)雜句時(shí)，動(dòng)輒用so， and，then，but，or，however，yet等非但達(dá)不到豐富表達(dá)方式的目的，反而使句子結(jié)構(gòu)松散、呆板。為了避免這種現(xiàn)象，可以通過(guò)使用不同的關(guān)聯(lián)詞，不僅能夠豐富句型，而且還能夠把思想表達(dá)得更清楚，意義更連貫。
■ 金題解析
當(dāng)前不少文學(xué)作品被改編成電影。有人選擇看電影，有人則喜歡讀原著。請(qǐng)你以“film or book, which do you prefer?”為題，按照下列要點(diǎn)寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文：
看電影：省時(shí)、有趣、易懂
2. 讀原著：細(xì)節(jié)更多、語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美
3. 我的看法及理由
【注意】
1. 詞數(shù)：100~120 文章題目和開頭已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）。
2. 參考詞匯： original work 或 book in the original （原著）
film or book, which do you prefer?
some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.
【寫作指導(dǎo)】
這是一篇提綱式半開放性作文。寫作時(shí)，我們既要注意漢語(yǔ)提示的要點(diǎn)，又要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)。因此，要分兩段寫出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)，在最后一段寫出自己的觀點(diǎn)。高考書面表達(dá)新評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)在語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用上對(duì)同學(xué)們提出了更高的要求，即在考查短文語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確性的基礎(chǔ)上，進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)用詞的得體性、表達(dá)方式的多樣性及語(yǔ)言的連貫性。因此，在寫作時(shí)，我們一定要盡可能多使用高級(jí)詞匯和復(fù)雜句型，要恰當(dāng)使用連接詞、過(guò)渡詞，這樣的文章才能出采，才能得高分。
【參考范文】
some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original. the reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story. besides, the film is usually more interesting, and it is easier to follow.
some others have just the opposite opinion. they think that they can get more detailed information from the original. meanwhile, the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.
personally, i agree with the second view. actually i have more reasons for it. i think i can stay at home, reading quietly in a situation of my own, and what’s more, i am able to better understand the author’s ideas. in a word, to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.
【精彩點(diǎn)擊】
寫作要求我們就選擇看電影還是讀原著談?wù)効捶�。作者在做到了要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)法正確的同時(shí)，較好地運(yùn)用句子間的連接詞，從而使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，層次分明，邏輯性強(qiáng)。
�、俚谝欢沃�，besides一詞的使用，多角度說(shuō)明人們選擇看電影的理由；
�、诘诙沃�，meanwhile一詞的使用，增強(qiáng)了語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的說(shuō)服力；
�、鄣谌沃�，what’s more一詞的使用，使作者在說(shuō)明自己觀點(diǎn)時(shí)呈現(xiàn)較強(qiáng)的邏輯性和感染力。in a word用于總結(jié)前文，突出了主題。
■ 關(guān)聯(lián)詞的應(yīng)用
文章段落之間的邏輯關(guān)系可以用啟、承、轉(zhuǎn)、合來(lái)概括�！皢ⅰ本褪情_頭, “承”是承接，“轉(zhuǎn)”是轉(zhuǎn)折，“合”是綜合或總結(jié)。
�。�1）用于“啟”的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)通常用在段落或文章的開頭： first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, nowadays, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately, currently等。例：
①nowadays，a heated debate （discussion） about private cars is under way in china.
時(shí)下，人們正議論著關(guān)于私家車的話題。
②in the recent few years, millions of fast food restaurants have mushroomed all over china.
近幾年，中國(guó)涌現(xiàn)上百萬(wàn)快餐店。
�、踓urrently， there is a widespread concern over increasing traffic accidents.
時(shí)下，不斷增加的交通事故已引起人們的廣泛關(guān)注。
�、躥irst of all， doing exercise every day is of the utmost importance in keeping fit.
首先，每日鍛煉對(duì)保持健康至關(guān)重要。
�、輌enerally speaking， the more you practice， the more skillfully you can write in english.
一般來(lái)說(shuō)，多實(shí)踐，英語(yǔ)的寫作能力就越強(qiáng)。
�。�2）用于“承”的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)通常用在段落中的第一個(gè)擴(kuò)展句中： second, similarly, in addition, besides, then, furthermore, moreover, what is more, what is worse, for example, for instance, certainly, surely, obviously, in other words, especially, particularly, in particular, indeed, still, third, truly, in fact, at the same time, no doubt等。例：
�、賢he answer to this problem involves many factors. first, . . . next, . . . last, . . .
解決問(wèn)題的方法涉及兩方面，首先，……其次，……最后，……
�、趖he following factors account for the problem. on the one hand, . . . on the other hand, . . .
以下原因?qū)е铝诉@一問(wèn)題， 一方面， ……另一方面，……
�、踑s a matter of fact, it is health rather than wealth that counts.
事實(shí)上，健康才是最重要。
�、躻hat is more serious is that we do not cherish the wildlife.
更嚴(yán)重的是，我們不珍惜野生動(dòng)物。
�、輎n addition, we should not neglect that everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society.
此外，我們不應(yīng)忽視每個(gè)人都想要一個(gè)溫馨祥和的社會(huì)。
（3）用于“轉(zhuǎn)”的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)通常用在段落中的第二個(gè)擴(kuò)展句中： but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in contrast, in any case, at any rate（無(wú)論如何）, nevertheless（雖然如此）, otherwise, or, or else, while, whereas, but, despite, in spite of ..., yet, instead等。例：
①however, this idea is now being questioned by more and more experts.
這一想法卻受到越來(lái)越多的專家質(zhì)疑。
②but just as a coin has two sides, tourism inevitably has its disadvantages.
凡事都有兩方面，旅游不可避免地有其缺陷。
�、踦arents complain their children are behaving unreasonably while the children declare their parents to be old-fashioned.
父母抱怨孩子行為不端，孩子則認(rèn)為父母太落伍。
�、躨n spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completed realized.
盡管有些變化，婦女解放仍未完全實(shí)現(xiàn)。
�、輔n the other hand, some examinations fail to measure how the students have really studied.
相反，有些考試卻難以真正衡量學(xué)生學(xué)識(shí)。
�。�4）用于“合”的關(guān)聯(lián)詞語(yǔ)通常用在段落的結(jié)論句或文章的結(jié)論段中：in a word, in general, in short, above all, after all, generally speaking，to sum up, finally, in conclusion, at last, in summary, therefore, as a result, above all, thus，after all, eventually, hence, in sum（總之）, on the whole（就整體而言）, to sum up等。例：
①last but no least, the shortcoming in education is the cause contributing to juvenile delinquency.
最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助長(zhǎng)青少年犯罪的原因。
�、趂or these reasons, we can conclude that receiving college education is wise.
基于這些原因，我們可以得出結(jié)論：接受大學(xué)教育是明智的。
�、踭herefore，it takes longer time and more energy to communicate in written english than in oral english.
因此，書面語(yǔ)交流比口語(yǔ)需要更多時(shí)間和精力。
�、躨n short， environmental pollution is the major problem to be solved to make our world a better place in which to live.
總之，要想生活安逸，必須解決環(huán)境污染問(wèn)題。
�、輋rom what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that advantages of bicycle far outweigh its disadvantages and it will still play essential roles in modern society.
通過(guò)以上討論，我們可以得出結(jié)論：自行車的優(yōu)點(diǎn)遠(yuǎn)大于缺點(diǎn)，并且在現(xiàn)代社會(huì)它仍將發(fā)揮重要作用。
高考英語(yǔ)作文精彩短語(yǔ)150條
1 欣賞大自然的風(fēng)景 to appreciate the scenery of nature
2 培養(yǎng)公德心 to cultivate the public mindedness
3 維護(hù)健康 to maintain health
4 保護(hù)環(huán)境 to protect the environment
5 開拓視野 to broaden the horizon
6 開拓心胸 to broaden the mind
7 調(diào)劑生活 to make life pleasant
8 松散身心 to relax oneself
9 啟迪心靈 to enlighten the mind
10 灌輸知識(shí) to impart knowledge into someone
11 追求理想 to seek after the ideal
12 實(shí)現(xiàn)抱負(fù) to realize one's ambition
13 守信用 to keep one's promise
14 跟上時(shí)代 to keep up with the times
15 欣賞古典文學(xué) to appreciate the classical literature
16 學(xué)習(xí)吉他 to learn guitar
17 陶冶品德 to cultivate the character
18 貢獻(xiàn)國(guó)家 to contribute oneself to the country
19 鍛煉身體 to strengthen, exercise the body
20 缺乏休閑活動(dòng) to lack recreations
21 作筆記 to take notes
22 使用參考書 to use reference books
23 關(guān)心社會(huì) to be concerned about the society
24 服從校規(guī) to follow the rules of the school
25 盡身為學(xué)生的責(zé)任 to fulfill one's duty as a student
26 克服困難 to overcome the difficulty
27 面臨困難 to be confronted with the difficulty
28 渡過(guò)困境 to weather the storm
29 走快捷方式 to cut the corner
30 量脈搏 to feel the pulse
31 開藥方 to prescribe the medicine
32 堅(jiān)守原則 to stick to the principle
33 注意衛(wèi)生 to emphasize the importance of hygiene
34 亂丟垃圾 to litter; to scatter garbage
35 美化環(huán)境 to beautify the environment
36 種植樹木 to grow trees
37 防止污染 to prevent the pollution
38 提升生活質(zhì)量 to promote the qualities of life
39 造成損害 to do damage to
40 對(duì)...有益 to benefit; to be beneficial to
41 對(duì)...有害 to be harmful to; to do harm to
42 任意停車 to park the car at random
43 制造噪音 to make noises
44 占用人行道 to occupy the sidewalk
45 妨礙交通 to hinder the traffic
46 排放污煙、廢氣 to belch smoke, exhaust, fume
47 造成不便 to cause inconvenience
48 造成混亂 to bring about the disorder
49 闖紅燈 to run through the red light
50 利用天橋 to make use of the overpass
51 查字典 to consult the dictionary
52 屏息 to hold one's breath
53 流淚 to shed tears
54 符合需要 to meet the demand
55 生根 to take root
56 產(chǎn)生結(jié)果 to bear fruit
57 打破沉默 to break the ice
58 氣餒 to lose heart; to get discouraged
59 振作 to pull oneself together; to take heart
60 采取步驟 to take steps; to take measures
61 緩和悲傷 to ease ( alleviate ) the sorrow
62 承受負(fù)擔(dān) to bear the responsibility
63 考慮到 to make allowance for
64 把握機(jī)會(huì) to seize the opportunity
65 跑腿 to run an errand
66 樹立楷模 to set a good example
67 接受教育 to receive education
68 提升生活的水平 to raise the standard of living
69 告辭 to take one's leave
70 有很深的了解 to have a deep understanding of
71 跟隨流行 to follow the fashion
72 提錢 to withdraw money
73 存錢 to deposit money
74 良心不安 the conscience stirs
75 自立 to be independent; to stand on one's own
76 英文很好 to have a good command of english
77 有廣泛的知識(shí) to have a wide range of knowledge
78 喜愛(ài)藝術(shù) to have a great liking for arts
79 扮演重要角色 to play an important role in
80 聊天 to have a chat with
81 有...才能 to have a talent for
82 選擇 to make a choice
83 有很大的影響 to have a great influence on
84 予人...很深的印象 to make a deep impression on
85 愚弄 to make a fool of
86 找借口 to make an excuse
87 給人搭便車 to give one a lift
88 打電話 to give someone a ring
89 冒險(xiǎn) to take chances
90 懷恨 to bear grudge against someone
91 牢記在心 to bear .....in mind
92 板著臉 to pull a long face
93 對(duì)...充耳不聞 to turn a deaf ear to
94 被開除 to be dismissed from school
95 生氣 to be angry with ( at )
96 負(fù)擔(dān)責(zé)任 to assume the responsibility
97 符合需要 to serve the purpose
98 變胖 to gain weight
99 有道理 to make sense
100 記日記 to keep a diary
101 盡己所能 to do what one can
102 擅長(zhǎng)網(wǎng)球 to be at home in tennis
103 郊游 to go on an outing
104 消磨時(shí)間 to kill time
105 增加生活的情趣 to increase the pleasures of life
106 精神抖擻 to be ( feel ) refreshed
107 解除緊張和焦慮 to relieve the tension and anxiety
108 宣泄久積的情緒 to release the pent-up feelings
109 游手好閑 to fool around
110 準(zhǔn)備考試 to prepare for the examination
111 參加課外活動(dòng) to take part in the club activities
112 無(wú)精打采的 to be listless
113 精力充沛的 to be vigorous, energetic
114 防臺(tái) to guard against the typhoon
115 逃避現(xiàn)實(shí) to escape the reality
116 達(dá)到目標(biāo) to achieve the aim
117 五育并重 to lay equal emphasis on the five disciplines
118 感到無(wú)聊 to feel ( be ) bored
119 感到剌激 to be excited
120 感到滿意 to be pleased, satisfied
121 感到失望 to be disappointed
122 感到振奮 to be encouraged, inspired
123 感到氣餒 to be discouraged, frustrated
124 感到疲倦的 to be exhausted
125 感到煩惱 to be worried, upset, disturbed, bothered
126 放棄理想 to abandon the ideal
127 奠定基礎(chǔ) to lay the foundation
128 失去耐心 to lose patience
129 進(jìn)步 to make progress
130 失去連絡(luò) to lose track of
131 保持連絡(luò) to keep in touch with
132 誤入歧途 to go astray
133 養(yǎng)成...的習(xí)慣 to make it a rule to; to cultivate the habit
134 統(tǒng)一中國(guó) to reunify china
135 不辭辛勞 to take the pains to
136 遇到交通阻塞 to be caught in a traffic jam
137 給...教訓(xùn) to teach someone a lesson
138 改過(guò)自新 to turn over a new leaf
139 引以為樂(lè) to take delight in
140 予...以打擊 to deal a heavy blow to
141 予...以威脅 to pose a threat to
142 取代 to take the place of
143 預(yù)作保留 to make the reservation
144 使...澈夜未眠 to cost someone a sleepless night
145 充滿喜悅 to be filled with joy
146 背誦 to learn....by heart
147 鼓勵(lì) to encourage, inspire
148 產(chǎn)生不同 to make a great difference
149 犯法 to violate the law
150 不遺余力 to spare no efforts to