高中英語(yǔ)滿分作文及名師評(píng)析：自薦志愿者
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假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將在你居住的地方舉辦，現(xiàn)正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請(qǐng)按要求用英文給組委會(huì)寫一封信。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1.個(gè)人情況：年齡，性別，學(xué)歷 2.個(gè)人條件：英語(yǔ)好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況 3.承諾：提供服務(wù)
注意：詞數(shù)100左右，開頭語(yǔ)已為你寫好;可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;生詞：申請(qǐng)—apply (v. ), application (n.)，志愿者—volunteer
Dear Sir / Madam:
I was quite excited when I heard the Asian Winter Games will be held in the city I live. My name is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy student in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volunteer for the games. I like English and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interpreter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chosen to be one.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
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這篇文章寫得非常流暢，把握了所有要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)以“我”為中心，詳細(xì)說明了自己對(duì)志愿者工作的結(jié)合，以此來表達(dá)自己的決心。由于用詞恰當(dāng)，這種表現(xiàn)就比較充分，具備一定的說服力。詞匯和語(yǔ)句的運(yùn)用也不錯(cuò)。