I went to Hainan on vacation
summer comes , and the weather has become irritating. my big sister suggested going to hainan for a good relax. i thought about it for a while and agreed. hainan is really a good place, where palm trees are abundant. we went to a park where we enjoyed cool palm drinks. we also went to visit the monkey island. the monkeys were really cute to look at. 夏日來臨,天氣變得惹人心煩. 我大姐建議去海南好好放松放松. 我想了一會,同意了.海南真是個好地方,棕櫚樹無處不在. 我們?nèi)チ艘粋�公園,在那里我們享受到了冰涼的椰子汁.我們還參觀了猴島.猴子們看起來真可愛.
after we came back from the travel, we found that our bodies have become stronger and healthier than before. my sister told me that she planned to travel again next year.我們從旅途返回后,我們發(fā)現(xiàn)身體比以前更結實了,健康了.我的姐姐告訴我她明年還打算旅游一次.
we really enjoyed this trip. we were very happy! 我們真的很享受這次旅途.我們好開心!
總結：這是一篇非常值得小朋友們學習的關于暑假旅游的英語作文。全文以一般過去時為基礎時態(tài)，不僅出現(xiàn)了很多常用短語，而且多處使用定語從句等長難句式，更在倒數(shù)第二段中出現(xiàn)了現(xiàn)在完成時和比較級，顯示出了小作者扎實的語言功底。