復(fù)旦大學(xué)-My University—Fudan
My University——Fudan
No classical work could pervade every cubic centimeter of air with such cultural fragrance but she.
No judicious sage could merge various elements as a magnificent poem but she.
No green tree could consist of vivid cells arousing every heart＇s anxiety for being young forever but she.
She is my university Fudan University.
The first time I entered the campus as a freshman, I was deeply attracted by her cultural atmosphere and historical connotation. Fudan is a graceful lady who is accustomed to serenity but meanwhile each action of hers outpours her innermost tern perament. Apparently it is worth every effort to probe into her world for the sake of both physical and mental enrichment. Her humanistic spirit inspires me to care for everything around, even the most trivial one.
On the other hand, catching up with the times, Fudan is modern and smart. You see, the many age-old buildings here are actually great libraries and labs. Scientific and technological developrnent is easily smelt in the air,because she never lags behind the world.
Fabulously, such a historical and scientific school is far more than an operational mechanism. Her everlasting youth and vigor beam through every corner of the campus and the young in school vivify every piece of concrete and wood here. What makes me happy and strong is that it perpetuates me with unfading energy. And it is definitely beneficial for me to be granted enthusi
Another deep impression of my university is her creativity and profundity. As is known to all, she has a wide range and comprehensive style. No wonder I can enjoy the multi-ceolored life here. Every school year a diversity of competitions and aetivities are held and a large number of students take active part in them. I do appreciate such a style, and in my mind＇s eye, she resembles a tall tree silhouetting with all shapes of branches while stretching far into the blue sky.
Undoubtedly there is a world of difference between university and high school. University students are supposed to enjoy more freedom to develop themselves. However, Fudan seems more concerned about the efficient cooperation and teamwork among students as to prepare them for the competitive society. I believe upon graduation I will be equipped with abundant skills to face more unknown challenges.
After all, in my opinion, university is for more cultivated character, richer knowledge and greater abilities. That＇s why I chose Fudan. She provides me with what I＇ve dreamed of.
Now all kinds of successes are in sight every day, and all I have to do is endeavor for a more beautiful future...
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簡 評
“日月光華，旦復(fù)旦兮�！彼瘸星皢⒑�，又多姿多彩；她有著悠久的歷史傳統(tǒng)，深厚的文化底蘊(yùn)；她與時俱進(jìn)，開拓創(chuàng)新；她古老的血脈中永遠(yuǎn)流淌著年輕的血液；她蔥郁的校園里永遠(yuǎn)穿梭著活躍的身影……
這就是作者筆下的復(fù)旦。她是一個夢想成真的世界，一方辛勤耕耘的土地；她是茁壯成長的樂園，更是撐起未來的支點。
這篇散文以詩一般的語言，淋漓盡致地表現(xiàn)了作者對母校的深情厚意，對大學(xué)生活的熱愛和對未來的憧憬。全文文筆流暢，玲瓏精巧，婉轉(zhuǎn)動人，給人一種“清風(fēng)朗月”的美妙感受。
不過，應(yīng)該指出的是，文中有些比喻比較牽強(qiáng)。另外，文章的結(jié)構(gòu)也還不夠緊湊。
(點評教師：時麗娜)