2007年湖南高考英語(yǔ)作文
假設(shè)你叫王平，李華是你的同窗好友，請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)，用英文給李華寫(xiě)一篇畢業(yè)留言。
要點(diǎn)：
1.簡(jiǎn)要描述李華在你心目中的印象；
2.用一到兩個(gè)相關(guān)事例進(jìn)行具體描述；
3.對(duì)李華表示美好的祝愿。
試題分析：
2007年湖南高考英語(yǔ)作文與2006年相比，第一：題型變化不大，依然是介于提綱式作文和開(kāi)放式作文中間的一種題型，主要內(nèi)容給出，但是還必須考生發(fā)揮具體事例，這與我上課時(shí)預(yù)測(cè)的模仿上海卷，北京卷的開(kāi)放式作文相符合；第二：內(nèi)容變化不大，去年是寫(xiě)老師Mr. Moore，今年寫(xiě)的是同窗好友李華，去年把描述老師的內(nèi)容融入詩(shī)歌中間，需要同學(xué)們?nèi)ヌ崛。衲暧脻h字來(lái)描述要點(diǎn)。第三考試形式依然是上課時(shí)強(qiáng)調(diào)的應(yīng)用文――留言，留言其實(shí)跟書(shū)信，便條差不多。
范文：
Dear Li hua,
Of all my classmates, you ,the most considerate and warmhearted girl, are always ready to give your hand to everyone who needs to help.
文章第一段寫(xiě)第一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。即文章中心
I clearly remember that last year our classmates Xiaomei suffered from acute appendix at night. It is you who took her to the hospital in midnight as quickly as possible. In order not to disturb others you even didn’t call up other classmates to accompany you. Until the next morning other classmates in our dormitory got to know the fact. And we knew that you didn’t sleep all the night to attend to Xiaomei. Moreover in our daily life, you always comfort the one who are in depression because of bad score or classmates relationship. So we would like to call you the sweet sister.
第二段舉出你能夠想的出來(lái)的，最簡(jiǎn)單的事例，作文的關(guān)鍵不是你的事例有多么新穎，而是你寫(xiě)的句子是否能夠顯示出你的水平，比如說(shuō)難詞，比如說(shuō)難句。比如說(shuō)你是否用了聯(lián)接詞，如in order to, until, moreover, so 等。
All in all, you are the fantastic girl who deserves all the beautiful prospects, such as studying in Beijing University. Finally wish you success and realize your dream!
Yours sincerely
Wang ping
第三段總結(jié)并給出你的祝福