Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?

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　　題目：Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary?

　　舒瑤（12班）

　　More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend . There are two different viewpoints about it.

　　Some people think that it is necessary .First , they can learn better with the help of the teachers than by themselves. Second , they can strengthen what they learn in class. Third , they can get more useful things in those classes.

　　However , other people insist that it is not necessary. For one thing, students will not listen carefully in their normal classes if they can get the same knowledge in training classes. For another thing, most senior students haven’t enough time to rest . What’s worse, the purpose of most of the training classes and family teachers is to earn money.

　　In my opinion, a training class or family teacher is not necessary. We can study well at school if we work hard.

　　文章條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，語意連貫，語病少，且表達(dá)靈活（見劃線部分）。(點(diǎn)評：王柏樹老師)

　　陳穎 (7班)

　　More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.

　　Some people think that a training class or family teacher is quite necessary. Following a teacher is always better than self study. For one thing, it can strengthen the knowledge in class, for another, students can learn more.

　　But some other people think it is unnecessary to have classes like this. Firstly, students may easily get into the habit of depending on others. Secondly, holiday is time for rest, students can’t keep studying without any rest. And what’s more, most training classes and family teachers are in the purpose of making money. Students can’t get good education in such classes.

　　In my opinion, different students have different situation. If a student is not good at self study, maybe a training class is fit for him. But if a student think that he could trust himself, he will never need it.

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　　雷洋 ( 21 班 )

　　More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend. There are two different viewpoints about it.

　　Some people think that it’s necessary to go to training classes or have family teachers. In their opinions, following the teachers’ instructions is more helpful than self study. For one thing, students may strengthen what they have learned in class; for another, they can study much more from the teacher.

　　However, other people think that it’s not necessary to do so, because depending on teachers is a bad habit. Besides, students should have time to take a rest and quite a lot of teachers in training classes are not strict with the students. They just care about the money that will go to their pocket.

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