幫人做事幫助大娘找兒子-Helping an Old Woman in Find.
幫助大娘找兒子
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根據(jù)下列內(nèi)容，寫(xiě)一篇關(guān)于你如何幫助一位大娘找到她的兒子的文章。
放學(xué)回家的路上，你看見(jiàn)一位老大娘背著一個(gè)沉甸甸的袋子站在路旁，樣子十分焦急。你走上前去問(wèn)她是怎么回事。原來(lái)大娘剛從鄉(xiāng)下來(lái)，進(jìn)城看望她在鋼鐵廠工作的兒子。由于初次進(jìn)城，不知道去鋼鐵廠的路。于是你就幫她背著袋子，帶老大娘去找她的兒子。你們費(fèi)了很大功夫才找到她兒子的住處，老大娘和兒子十分感激。你回家很晚，又累又餓，但你很高興，因?yàn)槟銥閯e人做了件好事。
【作文示范】
Helping an Old Woman in Finding Her son
高原
One day on my way home from school, I saw an old woman standing by the roadside①, with a heavy bag on her back. She seemed very worried. I went up to ask her what the matter was. The granny② told me that she had just come from the countryside to see her son, who worked in the steel works. As she had never been here before, she did not know the way to the factory. So I took her there. There was really a lot of difficulty in finding her son＇s place. The granny and her son were very thankful to me.
I got home very late, tired and hungry, but I felt happy, for I had done a good deed for the people.
【詞語(yǔ)解釋】
�、賠oadside [＇r+udsaid] n.路邊
②granny [＇gr$ni] n.[口]老婆婆；老奶奶
【寫(xiě)法指要】
本文是一篇寫(xiě)事的記敘文。寫(xiě)記敘文首先要交待清楚時(shí)間（when）、地點(diǎn)（where）、人物（who）、事件（what）、原因（why）和如何（how）六要素。這里的時(shí)間是“放學(xué)后”，地點(diǎn)是“路邊”，人物是“我，老大娘和她兒子”，事件是“幫助找人”，原因是“老大娘不認(rèn)識(shí)路”，最重要的是寫(xiě)好“如何（how）”，即事情發(fā)展的經(jīng)過(guò)。寫(xiě)好事件經(jīng)過(guò)的方法是按時(shí)間順序安排好行為情節(jié)（action），即我們通常所說(shuō)的“層次”。本文可分為4個(gè)行為情節(jié)：路遇大娘，上前問(wèn)訊，領(lǐng)其找子，娘倆致謝。最后，作者用一句話表達(dá)自己的思想感情，作為結(jié)尾。