投訴信:學(xué)校受污染-School Polluted
學(xué)校受污染
【內(nèi)容提示】
假如你是市一中的學(xué)生，名叫王紅。你要向本市一家報(bào)刊編輯（editor）寫(xiě)封信，反映你校受污染的問(wèn)題，呼吁有關(guān)部門(mén)采取措施，保護(hù)環(huán)境，防止污染。請(qǐng)你用下面的素材寫(xiě)100詞左右的一封信。
你校位于山腳下，一條小河從旁邊流過(guò)，院內(nèi)樹(shù)木四季常青，鮮花爭(zhēng)艷，景色美似花園。但兩年前，附近建起一家化工廠(chǎng)，排出大量污水、廢氣，造成校園污染，嚴(yán)重影響了師生健康。請(qǐng)有關(guān)部門(mén)出面解決這一問(wèn)題。
【作文示范】
School Polluted
No. 1 Middle School
March 5, 1997
Dear Editor,
Our school lies at the foot of a mountain with a small river passing by. It used to look like a beautiful garden. There used to be green trees and all kinds of flowers in our school yard all year round.
But great changes have taken place since a chemical works was built near our school two years ago. It produces poisonous gases and pours a large amount of waste water into the river. The terrible pollution has done great harm to us students and teachers as well as to the surroundings.
It＇s time for us to take steps to protect our surroundings and prevent them from being polluted.
Yours ever,
Wang Hong
【寫(xiě)法指要】
投訴信（letters of complaint）通常是寫(xiě)給廠(chǎng)家、商店、消費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)、報(bào)界或廠(chǎng)家、商店的上級(jí)主管部門(mén)，揭發(fā)產(chǎn)品質(zhì)量的低劣、服務(wù)態(tài)度的糟糕，抱怨不應(yīng)出現(xiàn)的情況或問(wèn)題等，以求得解決的信件。寫(xiě)投訴信要實(shí)事求是地把問(wèn)題講清楚，態(tài)度要冷靜，做到有禮貌，不能惡言傷人。
這封信的作者用的是對(duì)比法，先寫(xiě)學(xué)校的地理位置和原先學(xué)校的優(yōu)美環(huán)境，后寫(xiě)化工廠(chǎng)建起后對(duì)學(xué)校造成的污染，最后提請(qǐng)報(bào)界呼吁保護(hù)環(huán)境的問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)得有理有據(jù)，令人信服。