六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文：Let’s have a nice day
導(dǎo)語(yǔ)：以下是第一范文網(wǎng)小編為你整理的小學(xué)生六年級(jí)英語(yǔ)作文范文，希望您喜歡閱讀：
Let’s have a nice day
It’s Sunday tomorrow .I’m going to the bookstore with my friends tomorrow morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .We are going to eat our lunch at the restaurant. I like chicken, beef and vegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
怎樣才稱(chēng)得上是“美好的一天”?有兩點(diǎn)不能忘記，一是安排得充實(shí)，二是安排得有意義。這兩點(diǎn)小作者無(wú)疑都想到了，上午去書(shū)店看書(shū)買(mǎi)書(shū)，中午在飯店吃飯，下午去頤和園玩耍、劃船，豐富多彩!文章以時(shí)間為線索，敘述清楚，文筆也很優(yōu)美。
小朋友們?cè)趯?xiě)這種敘事的文章時(shí)，要盡量給讀者交代好時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物和活動(dòng)等，使文章有血有肉。要看好是寫(xiě)過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情，還是現(xiàn)在正在做的事情，或計(jì)劃、打算要做的事情，以選擇適當(dāng)?shù)木湫�。如果是�?xiě)將來(lái)的事情，那么就要注意在表述時(shí)多用“be going to+動(dòng)詞原形”這種句型。還有一點(diǎn)也很重要，那就是故事的線索要交代好，讓讀者在閱讀時(shí)對(duì)整個(gè)過(guò)程一目了然。
A Farewell Party
It’s the end of the school year. The students in Class Three have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performance at the party.
Look! Chen Jie is singing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese Kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing.
Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isn’t here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gifts fot her. And they will take a picture together.
【要領(lǐng)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
寫(xiě)法：這篇習(xí)作記敘了一個(gè)告別晚會(huì)。記敘了學(xué)年末的告別晚會(huì)上大家都表演了什么節(jié)目，以及晚會(huì)后大家要去看望劉蕓的故事。
時(shí)態(tài)：這篇習(xí)作可采用三種時(shí)態(tài)來(lái)寫(xiě)。由于本單元主要出現(xiàn)的時(shí)態(tài)是一般將來(lái)時(shí)和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，所以這里我們才用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)來(lái)寫(xiě)。
句型：
一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)：主語(yǔ)+動(dòng)詞原形+其他。
現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)：主語(yǔ)+現(xiàn)在分詞+其他。
一般將來(lái)時(shí)：主語(yǔ)+ be going to / will +動(dòng)詞原形+其他。
注意：由于本篇文章中所涉及的時(shí)態(tài)比較多，所以要注意一下時(shí)態(tài)的變化。學(xué)生們都在表演什么節(jié)目可以用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)，將要去做什么，要用將來(lái)時(shí)。另外還要注意，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)在肯定句中，主語(yǔ)是第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞也要用第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)。