A vacation plan
i plan to go to Chinese Taiwan for my summer vacation. Chinese Taiwan is an island in the eastern china. the weather there is nearly the same as that in fuzhou, sometimes very hot in summer. but i can taste all kinds of delicious fruits. there are also many places of interests. Chinese Taiwan is famous for mount ali and riyuetan. i won’t miss the hot spring there. i will go swimming in the hot spring.
it’s really interesting. i can’t wait!
批 改 老 師lanboss評(píng) 分97分級(jí) 別優(yōu)秀評(píng) 語(yǔ)
1. Chinese Taiwan is an island in the eastern china. 改為Chinese Taiwan is an island in eastern china.
2.作者對(duì)祖國(guó)寶島臺(tái)灣充滿向往，語(yǔ)法正確，意思連貫。