My summer holiday
i plan to go to Chinese Taiwan for my summer holiday. Chinese Taiwan is the largest island in china. and very beautiful. the weather is nearly the same as that in fuzhou. sometimes it is very hot in summer. i visit interesting places. Chinese Taiwan is famous for mount ali and riyuetan. and there are famous springs there.
it is really interesting and exciting to Chinese Taiwan. i hope i will have a great time there. i can’t wait to fly there.
批 改 老 師lanboss評 分95分級 別優(yōu)秀評 語
1. and very beautiful. 改為 and it is very beautiful.
2. i visit interesting places. 改為i am going to visit some interesting places.
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