我的同學(xué)-My Classmate
請以"My Classmate"為標(biāo)題寫一篇記敘文
要求:1、主題明確。語言流暢。思路清晰。 2、字?jǐn)?shù)在100字以內(nèi)。
思路點撥
寫記敘文要按照事物發(fā)展的客觀規(guī)律敘述,所敘述的內(nèi)容要交代清楚,條理清晰,重點突出,主次分明,詳略得當(dāng)。
這篇文章也是記敘文,主人公應(yīng)該用第三人稱,時態(tài)以一般過去時為主。本文以主人公為中心線索,以一、兩件事件為重點內(nèi)容去組織材料,反映主人公的形象特征。整個內(nèi)容情節(jié)要合情合理,有真實感,敘述時可按事情發(fā)展的順序進行,同時加以點評。
參考范文
My Classmate
Liu Kai is my classmate. He is a good student and always ready to help others.
One day on his way to school, he saw a little girl crossing the road. A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frightened to move. The car nearly hit her. Just then LiuKai rushed up to her and caught her by the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived, and he took her home. When LiuKai hurried into the classroom, the teacher had already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for what he had done.