My mother
my mother is 36 years old.she is a chinese teacher and a good mother.my mother is very beautiful.she has some long and black hair.two small eyes under hair.her nose is tall.her mouth is small and red.
she very love my family.becaus she does housework everyday,so she is very tired.but she doesn't tell us .because she don't want us to be sad.
i love my mother ,she loves me , too.
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