學(xué)校和父母雙方都應(yīng)對孩子負責(zé)任
Both School and Parents Should Take the Responsibility to Conduct the Children
Some people say parents should take the responsibility to conduct their children＇s behaviour, and tell them what is right or wrong, others say that it is the school＇s responsibility.
In my opinion, it is both the school＇s and the parents＇responsibities, for the parents are closer to their children than any other person. They can influence their children every day,especially the mothers, who are the children＇s first teachers,can influence their children most. So the parents are playing a very important role in conducting their children what is wrong or right.
The school, which is the children＇s second teacher, is becoming more and more important. Some children may always consider their teacher＇s behaviour to be right and do exactly what the teacher instructs them do.
From this we can conclude that school and parents should both take the responsibility to conduct the children. Only in this way, can we make our children behave well in future. Obviously this is the best way we can take at present.
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文章簡明扼要，直切主題，表達了自己的觀點：父母和學(xué)校應(yīng)該共同負責(zé)任規(guī)范孩子的言行，并舉出了論據(jù)，最后又重申了觀點。文章首尾呼應(yīng)，有理有據(jù)，語言流暢，是標準的好議論文。
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學(xué)校和父母雙方都應(yīng)對孩子負責(zé)任
有些人說父母應(yīng)負責(zé)規(guī)范子女的言行，并教導(dǎo)他們?nèi)绾畏直媸欠�。有些人則認為這是學(xué)校的責(zé)任。
我認為，這是父母和學(xué)校雙方的責(zé)任。因為，父母同孩子的關(guān)系比其它任何人都親密。他們每天都影響著自己的孩子。尤其是作為孩子首任教師的母親對孩子的影響最大。所以，父母在教導(dǎo)子女認識錯與對的過程中起著非常重要的作用。
學(xué)校是孩子的第二位教師。它已變得越來越重要了。有些孩子認為教師的言行是對的，而且對教師的要求言聽計從。由此看來，我們可以說學(xué)校和父母雙方都應(yīng)對孩子負責(zé)任。很顯然，這才是我們目前能采取的最好辦法。