My view on watching TV
i am one of the top students in my school. i like watching tv after doing my homework. however, my father doesn't allow me to do it. because he worries that it will have a bad influence on my study. i disgree with him about it.
as far as i am concerned, it is necessary for us to watch tv in spare time. firstly, i can gain a lot of knowldge and broaden in experiences by watching tv. secondly, it can keep me informed about the national and international current affairs. finally, it can make my heart relax and reduce my study stress.
as students, we are supposed to work hard at our lessons. nevertherless, it is not a bad thing for us to watch tv, and it is very useful for us to get some information by reasonable choice. what's more, if we can cope with our studies and entertainment, our study won't be affected at all and we won't be addicted to it.
therefore, i intend to talk to my father to convey my ideas. i am sure that he will know what i mean.
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