My High School Life
they say that the high school life is the busiest and nastiest but not for me. i think the school days are the happiest days of my life.
i have studied have for over one and half years. life here is very busy and exciting. there are many kinds of interesting after-school activities, such as sports meeting, science week and art week. they can develop our social skills. by thinking part in these activities, students show their special talents, their ability to lead, and their ability to get on with others. in addition, i have made many new friends who have really helped me on my life. and our teachers are kind to us. they not only educate us, but also encourage us to be a useful part of society.
so i think that although i find high school more difficult, i like my life here.
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they say that the high school life is the busiest and nastiest but not for me. i think the school days are the happiest days of my life.
i have studied have for over one and half years. life here is very busy and exciting. there are many kinds of interesting after-school activities, such as sports meeting, science week and art week. they can develop our social skills. by thinking part in these activities, students show their special talents, their ability to lead, and their ability to get on with others. in addition, i have made many new friends who have really helped me on my life. and our teachers are kind to us. they not only educate us, but also encourage us to be a useful part of society.
so i think that although i find high school more difficult, i like my life here.
批改 1.i have studied have（去掉，多余） for over one and （加a )half years. 2.by thinking(taking 筆下誤) part in these 3.who have really helped me on(in) my life. 評語：本篇文章介紹了自己的高中生活，雖然別人覺得很枯燥，但是作者認為非�？鞓罚恼聦懙暮馨�，和原來相比基本上沒有漢語思維的干擾。句子詞匯的使用比較高級，進步明顯，而且?guī)讉�錯誤細心的話都可以避免，你進步很大，加油啊